Fa-Q - Rabbit Hole

[Fa-Q]

Please speak softy, as I tumble down this rabbit hole,
See the ladder that's beside me, try to grab it and hold,
Take a hold of the sides, it turns into splinters,
The grounds covered in snow that burns in winters,
And as I fall the summers freeze into spring,
I fall on my knees to sing, as a bird has the breeze in its wing,
I have a palace that under hand, thats with Alice in wonderland,
She holds my morning wood, my phallus is like a gun in hand,
So speak softy, please listen close, turn up your hearing aids,
As my tangled pony tails, are close to and nearing braids,
I love the way I mumble and stall, around Jill,
I was at the top, I stumble and fall, down the hill,
I wake up from my deep slumber, have the gall, cause I found the will,
Found the will, and I hear the sound of kill,
Go to investigate, just to test my fate,
Try to beat my heart beat, but my chest is late,

I find a hole, that someone tried to plug up,
Either that or tried to have it dug up, I fall in, and I'm fallen,
Spiraling down the rabbit hole, the spinning won't stop,
I'm falling, and falling, let's just hope I don't drop,

I see a girl skipping on the side of a wall, that girl is wreckless,
She wears all she owns, around her neck, a pearl necklace,
Its taken by a greek god, but when I speak I appaud,
The girl has a smile on one side, and a frown on the other side,
She screams, that's all she has, her parents and brother died,
So I am determined to earn it in a duel, a game a ice,
And I burn the fool, and I just learned the pool,
Is really the lake of fire, the girl hadn't been up the mountain,
So I take her higher, and awake the liar, within her,
She tells me her family is from outer space,
This spills from a louder face, so I yell run,
Then teach her how to race, see the makeup,
Lick her cheek, just to see how that powder taste,
She's taken a back, she kisses me, with lips of thorns,
She grabs me by the shoulder, and her grip warns,
Of the war coming soon, she runs, humming a tune,
She whispers follow me, into the dark forest,
The trees move with the wind, until they bark explore us,

I find a hole, that someone tried to plug up,
Either that or tried to have it dug up, I fall in, and I'm fallen,
Spiraling down the rabbit hole, the spinning won't stop,
I'm falling, and falling, let's just hope I don't drop,

It begins to rain, my clean slate, now has sins stain,
This whole dream's wrestles my mind, and pins my brain,
So I light a cigarette, just to see if I might be bigger yet,
Now I'm chain smoking, worrying about heart attacks,
While my brains stroking, plus the rains provoking,
My throat screams out for the girl, but the pains choking,
She's right in front of my face, holding up art,
I want to try and trace, she's folding up my heart,
I see a short man, jump then walk right up to me,
He smiled, and said, would you like a cup of tea,
He said I'm a lazy man, like a man who's an able sloth,
I was slightly angered, so I wrapped him in the table cloth,
There's a smoking cat, who is lighting a bong,
He changes colors, even as I'm writing this song,
I take a single puff, provoking me to fight the strong,
Alice is in the dark corner, she dabs her crotch,
Acting like she doesn't know her time of the month,
She grabs my watch, and then stabs the blotch,
Her thighs bleeding, she says I'm what her eyes needing,
Each of my slow, heavy legs, and long feet tries leaving,
I see the exit, my hands on the sides, I grab it and hold,
This was my trip down, the rabbit hole,

[GoodGirlsGetGutted]

This one's interesting. It was pretty bizarre, but I enjoyed it.
It's phallus, not fallus.

[Fa-Q]

Hey thanks GGGG...all of these I make are weird cause they're like dreams I have that I write down...pretty fucked up dreams I know...

Oh and thanks I fixed it

[Yah-hah]

Pretty dope concept man I liked it. Chorus had a weird time flowing with it but I get your flow lol

[Fa-Q]

Yea chorus fits the beat perfectly...thanks Jus

[classthe_king]

Funny concept Rhyming and all that is good, flow is alright. Only thing i would say to work on which you never do is make sure your rhymes are the same syllables or else it sounds weird.

[Just Silver]

this was something else lol

thought it was gonna have a cartoon concept like bugs bunny or something but this worked

overall 8/10

[Fa-Q]

Thanks Class and Silv

[Fa-Q]

I have some fucked up dreams ...

[BabyBLue91]

And I thought I had weird dreams hehe.. didnt expect something like that. Youre amazing at telling stories. As strange as it was I could still picture the scenes with every line I read.. Good job I liked it alot!

[Fa-Q]

Thanks Babyblue

[Fa-Q]

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