Coleon vs Weirdo (Coleon Wins)

[TheWeirdoIsBack]

Give the average man a knife and he may be tempted to kill/
But give me the exact same knife and I really fucking will/
I don't really want your sympathy just pay me your attention/
I got five people in my basement hanging from suspensions/
It all had started with this chick she tore me right the fuck apart/
Literally insane she choked my brain and stabbed me in the heart/
Now my words are art but I used them as a barrier/
I loved the bitch to death which was why I had to bury her/
Blood was running down my hands her organs fell out on my pants/
That was all that I had planned but another idea was soon implant/
The world had hurt me far too long now its my turn to get revenge/
Born with a fucking temper you think its good to push me off the edge/
Soon you're hanging in my basement smack dab next to my first bitch/
Your skin in front of you I specifically placed it to get rid of my murder itch/
Don't worry friend I feed you hope you like the taste of your fucking kids/
One beating an hour who's dying first me and the demons are taking bids/

Ahh, I probably could've made it a lot more gruesome. I spend too much time telling the story.

Edit: I think I took on a lil' more than I should have here lol.

[classthe_king]

Coleon for sure He was just lyrically on another level. His words painted a gruesome picture in your head while reading. It was insane.

[Spyder]

i see your game cole, write a horror core peice but want another win, take a break from battling so you do this

but yeah i gotta agree with what class said

[Spyder]

ok im done talking to you, we never understand eachother

[GoodGirlsGetGutted]

Oh my.
Neither of you made me flinch in the slightest, but I'd give it to Coleon for having more descriptive lyrics.
Remember, the key to writing gruesome lyrics isn't painting a vivid picture for your audience, but making your audience wince without having to.

[Spyder]

3-0 KO Cole