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Re: Coleon - Reminisce (Very Long)

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Feb 16th, '10, 07:42

Hey! This is brilliant. Probably one of the best pieces I've read in creative writing.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12
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Re: Coleon - Reminisce (Very Long)

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Feb 16th, '10, 09:16

I like the Relapse/Rebirth allusion.
Yeah, I'm extremely impressed with this whole thing.
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Re: Coleon - Reminisce (Very Long)

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Feb 16th, '10, 18:51

Coleon wrote:Image

Admit it, you're pissed off that no one else commented on your masterpiece.
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Re: Coleon - Reminisce (Very Long)

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Feb 16th, '10, 19:01

Yo, fuck that. Keep posting here.
It's just a slow day.
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Re: Coleon - Reminisce (Very Long)

Postby Solace » Feb 18th, '10, 00:14

That was an incredible piece, loved it Cole. I only wish I was as good a writer as you, and though it sounds like dickriding it's just a really great piece and it seems like now you're right on your A game, so keep at it bro.
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