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House Of Mirrors

Postby Spyder » Feb 18th, '10, 06:07

http://www.zshare.net/audio/7278568889700a5e/ beat
gonna record eventually

The pain I wallow in, wont change tomorrows shit
This brains a thoughtless pit, a range n I wonder it.
Wish I could change the time and my frame of mind
Its strange but I vision missions through angered eyes.
This strangled life, tangled and twined with hopeless promise
Ready to brace these dudes up like an orthodontist
Still sort of novice, tryin to make unorthodox hits
But still modest so regardless I havent been taught shit
Speakin like a prophet like im somehow beyond this
But honest-ly I see that I still cannot spit.
Remain plastered with the lies the mask is where I hide
Never seen the real me im the master of disguise,
Disastrous tries cant imagine how ive begun to feel
Tryin to see my face but I gotta find which ones real.

Hook
As quick as the day changes so do my faces
Back and forth about who im gonna play with,
Remain nameless silent as the crowd gets nearer
Cant figure out the real me in this house of mirrors.

Ive begun to fade, never could have won the race
All these takin hearts, how could I have won with spade?
Been here so long ive become this place, its sad
Different day has past with this new abrasive mask.
Felt like I had finally made it to this stage at last
Till it burnt around me left in a haze and ash.
My mangled gasp drowned out by sorrow and pain
Continue, next move cause tomorrows a game.
I cant stand my own reflection, still reminiscin
Brain in the clouds like my head is missin, to bad it isnt.
This sad magician ran out of tricks up his sleeve kids
Still gotta break my back to pick up the pieces.
These misdemeanors nothin to my actual fate
Stare in these mirrors till they fuckin shatter and break

Hook
As quick as the day changes so do my faces
Back and forth about who im gonna play with,
Remain nameless silent as the crowd gets nearer
Cant figure out the real me in this house of mirrors.
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Re: House Of Mirrors

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 18th, '10, 06:11

Jesus Christ I love the flow on this mofo...I kinda did a stop and go for it...idk if you did that but good drop spyder
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Re: House Of Mirrors

Postby Spyder » Feb 18th, '10, 07:19

thanks bro, maybe this is the start of me writing agian hopefully i can finally come up with those two verses :y:
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Re: House Of Mirrors

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 18th, '10, 09:01

Yeah man flow was :worship: Hook was pretty fly too man really tight wanna hear it :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: House Of Mirrors

Postby Spyder » Feb 18th, '10, 18:53

thanks yah :y:
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Re: House Of Mirrors

Postby Spyder » Feb 19th, '10, 06:17

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Re: House Of Mirrors

Postby Spyder » Feb 19th, '10, 06:27

:laughing: i didnt know it didnt work, but ill repost it tomorow im not on my comp right now
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Re: House Of Mirrors

Postby Spyder » Feb 20th, '10, 03:34

beat re-uploaded :y:
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Re: House Of Mirrors

Postby classthe_king » Feb 20th, '10, 03:36

This is sick as fuck man :worship: Can't wait to hear your improvement on your audio when you record it
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: House Of Mirrors

Postby Spyder » Feb 20th, '10, 04:00

thanks bro :worship:
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Re: House Of Mirrors

Postby Solace » Feb 21st, '10, 02:11

Damn this is fucking tight. I love the concept.

Never seen the real me im the master of disguise,

And everything about the chorus is perfect. Great job on this piece.
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Re: House Of Mirrors

Postby Spyder » Feb 21st, '10, 03:31

thanks sol :worship:
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