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Homonym Homocide

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 17th, '10, 22:31

There's so many hidden things in this bitch :smoking: enjoy
trying to find them :)

What happenes when there's a mourning night,
When the star shed tears, is it a boring sight,
And when the moon know they'd be hurt, was his warning right,
What is a shining knight in the morning,
Dows he wish he was an eagle's height when its soaring,
When its noon, does he know night has soon begun,
And does he even know the name, of the moons son,
Can he own his own hours,
does he speak to the sun shone on flowers,
What does he ask when his heart stole its beat,
Does he ask how to sell, the soul of your feet,
What happens if my sole is a whore to the devil,
If I scream to angels, and say that's more my level,
Had all the marijuanna known of its powers,
And when its not smoked, does it die next to grown flowers,
And eventually it rot and dies, it makes sure it dots its eyes,
Does he tease the cross, are there flees on frost,
When every lost soul, fleas when lost,
Does the knight know he has fingerprints of a king,
Looking back on the beach, seeing what my foot prince mean,

Does he know he can raise his son, under the rays of the sun,
And are you wounded if you, just graze the sun,
Every Tuesday, Jesus, has he risen from death,
Will police ever imprison my breath,
What's the basement of an entrepeneur,
What is a dung beatle, on the manuer,
Can he still just sit and, stair at a crusifix,
Does the flame of a candle, wear loose wicks,
Is a board not ever not doing anything, or wood ever bored,
Dies an eagle fight with a sword, even if he's never soared,
Can my wants happen more than one time,
Or is it once I can see the mornings sunshine,
It is metal if I take something, with a gun crime,
Am I strong like steel, even if I have a numb mind,
Does a lion, always have to tell the truth,
And if he is lyin', each time it happens, out fell a tooth,
Cents I'm poor, I'll make dollars alone,
My mind makes since, pressing on my collar bone,
You say I need to grow a pear, should I give a fruit, to show I care,
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Re: Homonym Homocide

Postby UzaKING » Feb 17th, '10, 23:53

Good job :y: how long did it take you to write that?
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Re: Homonym Homocide

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 17th, '10, 23:57

uzaking wrote:Good job :y: how long did it take you to write that?

Thanks and maybe like 2 hours all together. I would think of a line and pieced it together...thanks :)
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Re: Homonym Homocide

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Feb 17th, '10, 23:58

Bibliobibuli, you fib! you lie!
My fibuli are simply side by side

It's pretty impressive, but I like your more emotional work better.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12

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Re: Homonym Homocide

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 18th, '10, 00:02

GoodGirlsGetGutted wrote:Bibliobibuli, you fib! you lie!
My fibuli are simply side by side

It's pretty impressive, but I like your more emotional work better.

Thanks...what was that first phrase you said?
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Re: Homonym Homocide

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Feb 18th, '10, 00:17

A meaningless pantemeter I came up with on the spot to signify my feelings that it's easier to play with words and make nonsense than it is to write something meaninful, which I feel is your strength.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
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Re: Homonym Homocide

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 18th, '10, 06:49

Did you guys get what I was doing on this...switching the word that is the other words homonym...
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Re: Homonym Homocide

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Feb 18th, '10, 07:03

Fa-Q wrote:Did you guys get what I was doing on this...switching the word that is the other words homonym...

We're not stupid.
Technically, the true requirement of homonymy is that the words are spelled the same (not just pronounced the same).
For example, stalk (plant) and stalk (verb) are pure homonyms.
However, feet and feat are not considered homonyms in the strict sense of the word.
But that's okay, it's near impossible to not have any onomasiological disparities in such a piece.
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Re: Homonym Homocide

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 18th, '10, 07:09

Do you enjoy raping people using a page from Webster dictionary as a condom lol...
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Re: Homonym Homocide

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Feb 18th, '10, 07:11

I don't use condoms, they take away all the feeling.
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Re: Homonym Homocide

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 18th, '10, 07:14

GoodGirlsGetGutted wrote:I don't use condoms, they take away all the feeling.

So you make your bitch take some Thesaurus birth control
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Re: Homonym Homocide

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 18th, '10, 08:54

:worship: Thats pretty dope man. I dig all the mourning, knight stuff was pretty ill man
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Re: Homonym Homocide

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 18th, '10, 14:51

Thanks Jus :wave:
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