tell me how to improve
as im sittin spittin this semi-written rap listen
my gats hittin kneecaps and blastin past with precision
these savage raps pass from fiction to fact
like a martian attack on a village of blacks
or any nation that acts like the faction aint back
to pillage anthrax and airship it in packs
to shacks in Iraq strapped in turban wraps
so they open it fast
at last theyre dead in a vast attack that surpassed
the blood shed in the past, a new forecast has amassed
i grab my battleaxe of the rack to cripple and slash
the devil is back to whip-lash any friendship into ash
so as i hit this hash please pass the drip back <---- this is where i got bored

as i sip fast, im now trashed so forget that
im now bored with this rap so i guess ill end at that
infact i will add one more line just to laugh at