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Fa-Q - I Would Still Want You

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Fa-Q - I Would Still Want You

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 18th, '10, 20:07

I posted this a while back but thought I'd post it again, it was inspired by a fuckin cunt...but she was amazing when I wrote this

If you moved a thousand miles away,
I would still want you,
If you didn't have any smiles today,
I would still want you,
If the sun stopped being bright,
I would still want you,If the weaning night,
Started seeing light,
I would still want you,
If all my lyrics about you, burned in a fire,
I would still want you,
If I said I didn't want you, and you learned I'm a liar,
I would still want you,
If I gave you this and you turned your back away,
I would still want you,
If all colors turned black and grey,
I would still want you,
If I died a thousand fast deaths,
I would still want you,
If I knew I only had a thousand last breaths,
I would still want you,
If I have to paint a picture, of how I feel about you,
I would still want you,
If you never understand, which I doubt you do,
I would still want you,
If for you, have an endless smile, I have to cry forever,
I would still want you,
If for your happiness, I don't tell you, and I don't try ever,
I would still want you,
if I die today, because I fly away, I want you to know,
I would still want you,
If I lied awake, thinkin I would have tried to take,
My songs to you, that a part of me died to make,
I would still want you,
If all my smiles, turned to the brink of tears,
I would still want you,
If you leave my poems in the rain, and all the ink smears,
If you cried a thousand tears straight,
I would still want you,
If just for you, I had a thousand years to wait,
I would still want you,
If were together, only in my head,
I would still want you,
If were never together, and you lie, lonely in your bed,
I would still want you,
If you never looked my way,
I would still want you,
I would want you to know, you hooked your prey,
I still want you,
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Re: Fa-Q - I Would Still Want You

Postby Medicine Ball » Feb 18th, '10, 20:09

awesome, this has inspired me to make a similar piece :y: gna start it now.
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Re: Fa-Q - I Would Still Want You

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 18th, '10, 22:48

Glad I inspired you :)
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Re: Fa-Q - I Would Still Want You

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 19th, '10, 06:23

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