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Postby Solace » Feb 18th, '10, 00:41

The stress behind my lines is best behind my time,
So lets be kind and fine, forget, rewind my crimes,
The debts be high and fined, though I sit and linger,
When I wouldn't give a shit but I would flip the finger,
And I would get so angered over my father wow,
I've been over it for years so really why bother now?
Shit no one's ever liked me whenever I try to roam,
Misery loves company though I sit and cry alone,
Choked and pushed around, frequently put to frown,
Nothing to look forward to, that's why I'm looking down,
Shooken now, hated by all with a biased hand,
And I just keep falling every time that I try to stand,
Thinking "Am I a man?" No, I'm a rookie, disgrace,
Me and my dad alike, shamed when I look in his face,
Like every single thought of mine is sent to haters,
So I tear when I'm here putting the pen to paper,
Writing having fun with it, like I don't mean none to shit,
So this steel won't be stainless after I'm done with it.
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Re: Vague Summary

Postby classthe_king » Feb 18th, '10, 04:34

Dude like I said this was great :worship: Glad to see your back
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Vague Summary

Postby DƎRDYPK » Feb 18th, '10, 04:36

pretty nice verse there Solace :y:
I dig it
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Re: Vague Summary

Postby Solace » Feb 18th, '10, 23:30

lol thanks homies.
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Re: Vague Summary

Postby lilrossy » Feb 19th, '10, 06:11

Sikk flow man.
nice drop.
:y: :y:
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Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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Re: Vague Summary

Postby gutawafang » Feb 19th, '10, 08:09

Fuck. It's funny because I flowed this shit to Drop The World beat. I was literally singing the Lil Wayne's way. :laughing:

It's good flow, Solace.

Thinking "Am I a man?" No, I'm a rookie, disgrace,
Me and my dad alike, shamed when I look in his face,

Man, nice mutlies. :y:
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Re: Vague Summary

Postby Solace » Feb 21st, '10, 02:13

Thanks Cliff & Lilrossy. Appreciate it. :worship:
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Re: Vague Summary

Postby gutawafang » Feb 21st, '10, 13:08

Suddenly he called me Cliff! :sweating:
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