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Truth Hurts (The Rebirth) (Feat. Coleon & J Roc)

Postby Solace » Feb 20th, '10, 05:21

So many disses in here haaa.

[Intro: Solace]
I'm a writer, and I ain't backing down,
You a biter, so who's laughing now?
I'm a fighter, get ya asskicked pow,
You just a motherfucking rappin' clown.

[Solace]
Like an Asian mountain range we leave him-a-layin',
The grims is taking life, it's gym, we playin' elimination,
Glock and stop ya shit, you the opposite of flawlessness,
Ain't even tall as Solace dick, slap n wack a rockin' chick,
You not spitting true, our little feud is not finished dude,
I'll take you under my wings, note they ain't hospitable,
Acting like you hos-spit-able, now I see thee all hurt,
'Cause you outta place like Scott & Sac at an ICP concert,
He's about to learn this, that he won't amount to birdshit,
You a writer? Naw, your whole concepts is out of survce,
Skate and games, get board like when I'm done peepin' buns,
Reap ya run, wake you up like nightmares when you sleeping son,
I'm a razorblade, call me next time when ya slit your wrists,
You nothing yet, I'm cutting edge, leave ya bitch dismissed,
These blades ain't just silver, you see I'm leaving them red,
Meaning they bled seemingly, oh these meaningless men,
Death we force when the semi floors these many whores,
So G, keeping it low key, fuck it he ain't here anymore,
Ya biggest fan? Ya mom, then I'm 'bout to doubt the rest,
So what you goin' do when Spyderman is out of webs?
Rap you goin' listen, we'd rather not have you go missing,
Just because you like pie don't mean you a mathematician,
You can write too? Psych dude, fighting fire with mic fuel,
Only call you dirty because you dropped outta highschool,
Pass the mike fool, you rapping tight? Got me laughing nice,
Only time you get tha pussy's when you with hermaphrodites.

[Coleon]
My mind is the slyest weapon, go head just try steppin',
I hear the same shit like there's an echo in this writin' section,
let flow my rhymes to catch em, packin my lil gatallin chrome,
battle bro? don't fuck with Cast even when I snap ya bones,
this chapters closed, of you thinkin that ya the best,
my syllables tight, imagery bright, best beleive I'm nothin less,
punches blessed, sunk his chest, next opponent standin tall,
He dares to bra, I'll snap his clique quick just for rantin dog,
I'm a panzer drawn, at dawn to battle with the legion forth,
rap 101, with Filet Minon, still couldn't meet the course,
every feature scorched, not just feats. maybe eyes and nose,
thighs & bones, the dangly thing right inside his throat,
try to boast, I'll fry & roast, put you in a comatose,
this guy must be three, cause I'm so dope that he'll over-dos,
may I propose a toast, raise all these glasses high,
we'll kick ya ass, split ya fast, make these little faggots die,
crack ya spine, smash and fly, every single jab is blatant,
it's Helmet Head, Kumar, and Cas's best imitation.

[J Roc]
Whos Hard? Tash You'll Get Bruised, Scarred And Stuck Between Two Cars
i Married-Tha-Eight You'll Get 'Carried-Away' Cause Your Taking It Too Far [?]
My-Shoulder Make u 'Slide-Over' Like Shutting Down Tha SchoolYard
Since my Flow's-Dope i'll Leave ur 'Post-Pwned' Up Until June Starts (postponed)
*First Of All , Ur Tha Worst Of All But I Guess u think ur Verse Is Raw?
Not Shirts Or Socks but I'll Make You 'Tap-Out' I guess It's Smack-down Verses Raw
Tash U About As Hard As Jello , Ur both Queer Go Tell Bar I Said So
Cuz Ur A-Game Couldnt be 'Straight-Flames' If Ur bar's Were Metro
Karma's Settled u Stupid-fuck 'Shooting-Up' Only time u 'Armed' With 'Metal'
*Eat This Man Alive, Eff Ur Magic-Tricks u couldn't 'Channel-It' With Sattlelite.. Questions?
Answer Mine.. How is Bar-A-God When this 'Mod-Fell-Off' Like Flander's Wife
Sad u tried? Bet u was Lost-For-Words I Thought-ur-Verse Was a Battle 'Cry' .. haha
viewtopic.php?f=26&t=41370 ... Biatch
*Don't Make This Ugly, Cause Tha Heat'll Make 'Bar Melt' Cause Tha Day's Is Sunny
I Could Spark-Three's & Take off 'Bar-Knee' Cause He'll Say He Loves Me ... lol
U Tryina Be Me? Smell tha Flowers in Waynes World Until ur Lungs is 'Weezy'
And Since Ur Life is PG , imma take 'Bar Nickels' Everytime That i 'See Weed' !!!!!
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Re: Truth Hurts (The Rebirth) (Feat. Coleon & J Roc)

Postby Spyder » Feb 20th, '10, 05:32

love it

subliminals to me :unsure:

eithre way tight drop :worship:
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Re: Truth Hurts (The Rebirth) (Feat. Coleon & J Roc)

Postby Kosovic » Feb 20th, '10, 05:32

Boring.... really.... boring.
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Re: Truth Hurts (The Rebirth) (Feat. Coleon & J Roc)

Postby J Roc » Feb 20th, '10, 05:36

Proppsss For Readin & Feeding Guys.
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Re: Truth Hurts (The Rebirth) (Feat. Coleon & J Roc)

Postby Kosovic » Feb 20th, '10, 05:51

Still i find it pointless, exactly why you do all these?
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Re: Truth Hurts (The Rebirth) (Feat. Coleon & J Roc)

Postby Kosovic » Feb 20th, '10, 05:58

Coleon wrote:
Kosovic wrote:Still i find it pointless, exactly why you do all these?


me?


And the others generally speaking.
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Re: Truth Hurts (The Rebirth) (Feat. Coleon & J Roc)

Postby Kosovic » Feb 20th, '10, 06:04

You are killing my tolerance as well.
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Re: Truth Hurts (The Rebirth) (Feat. Coleon & J Roc)

Postby J Roc » Feb 20th, '10, 06:05

Kosovic wrote:You are killing my tolerance as well.


PM us instead of spamming tha thread there fonzi
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Re: Truth Hurts (The Rebirth) (Feat. Coleon & J Roc)

Postby Kosovic » Feb 20th, '10, 06:08

J roc wrote:
Kosovic wrote:You are killing my tolerance as well.


PM us instead of spamming tha thread there fonzi


Its your thread and its un-constructive criticism, so yeah, instead of saying "wwwwwwwwwwwwwooooooooooooooooow sooooo aaaaaaaawesomeeeeeee propz propz" i instigate a convo where you can TRY to elaborate on why you waste your time writing "rhymes" thinking its an important thing.

I think you gonna like me after that.
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Re: Truth Hurts (The Rebirth) (Feat. Coleon & J Roc)

Postby Kosovic » Feb 20th, '10, 06:11

Coleon wrote:Kos we are 14-16 year olds

how old are you and still spamming a forum?


21
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Re: Truth Hurts (The Rebirth) (Feat. Coleon & J Roc)

Postby J Roc » Feb 20th, '10, 06:11

Kosovic wrote:
J roc wrote:
Kosovic wrote:You are killing my tolerance as well.


PM us instead of spamming tha thread there fonzi


Its J Roc's thread and its unrelated posts, so yeah, instead of saying "Im a douche" i instigate a convo where you can TRY to elaborate on why i'm waste your time trying to be a douchebag on a public forum.

Cause I think you gonna hate me after that.


But then again ....
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Re: Truth Hurts (The Rebirth) (Feat. Coleon & J Roc)

Postby Kosovic » Feb 20th, '10, 06:14

Coleon wrote:
Kosovic wrote:
Coleon wrote:Kos we are 14-16 year olds

how old are you and still spamming a forum?


21


exactly gtfo


They unbanned me for that exact reason you know.
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Re: Truth Hurts (The Rebirth) (Feat. Coleon & J Roc)

Postby Kosovic » Feb 20th, '10, 06:20

Coleon wrote:you're 21 years of age still conversing on an online forum

which I wouldn't even care if you actually were on here for a reason like some of these audio peeps

but you literally come here to socialize while you're a grown fucking man


Ur point?
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Re: Truth Hurts (The Rebirth) (Feat. Coleon & J Roc)

Postby Kosovic » Feb 20th, '10, 06:25

Coleon wrote:My point is don't criticize us for doing stuff that doesn't matter if your life consists of loggin' on to read it.


Why? Who's to stop me?
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Re: Truth Hurts (The Rebirth) (Feat. Coleon & J Roc)

Postby Tash8 » Feb 20th, '10, 06:32

j-roc your soooo cute with ur disses :wub:
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