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420 pt.5

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420 pt.5

Postby Just Silver » Feb 20th, '10, 21:22

Thoughts kept coming :smoking:

I feel like a mindwarped, self centered mine source,
gold relics and angelically, on high horse,
this thai is hoarse, with the air course
that the heat ,which then force,
thc i import,
dopamine airport ,pack your bowls
and your bags, see we on a roll
no control mr foliage your soul,
you will be a green giant at 18 years old
spaced in the zone sure it may orbit
sure i like morphing, through these endorphins,
be all mighty powerful, tower over ya
jenga bitch one miss,i lift with all support, and distance,
and well i haven't been lifted since,
flipped my lid off of this bullshit,
you pull shit i pull twice,
you knew right TH right C im nice ,
don't make sense such an easy fight,
paper knifes, soaked in life
mixed with a little bit of Obie Trice,
cut the shit you know hes nice,
but pop a little bit of aggravation,
when a spit or dribble relapse then takem,
again them little fuckin bastards waitin,
for me to get my ass damn trashed or wasted,
mind is racing finish line burning ,
switch the nine turn it, to an all time learning,
scripture through number two pictures,
HB crazy quarter line thick ya,
cant really think clearer or sicker,
my hides true to this shit no pickups,
or pick up lines how i pick up my,
dazed in shine i take limelight with wine,
mix a little on the rocks like a midnight beach,
fix this little clock the times on me,
my im weaned, of the weed i burned
what did i say i have no concern...
Last edited by Just Silver on Feb 20th, '10, 23:46, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: 420 pt.5

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 20th, '10, 21:27

Daaamn...I love your flow on this mafucker...great wordplay too. Geez silve you've really fuckin improved...we should collab again :smoking:
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Re: 420 pt.5

Postby Just Silver » Feb 20th, '10, 21:29

Fa-Q wrote:Daaamn...I love your flow on this mafucker...great wordplay too. Geez silve you've really fuckin improved...we should collab again :smoking:

thanks lol i sent a PM about collabing right before this comment weird :8)
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Re: 420 pt.5

Postby Ticalrecords » Feb 20th, '10, 23:39

fuck u for tht "dopamine airport" phrase, i had a line like tht too haha. shits ill man good job.
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