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Get Hooked On Phonics(Coleon Diss)

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Get Hooked On Phonics(Coleon Diss)

Postby Spyder » Feb 21st, '10, 04:38

a real keystyle

Claimin you ill your ass in last place, with whack spray
Yea your original, cant even make up your own track name.
Saying im on Class, Sajjad, Anonymous and J Roc’s dick
Shit you on mine bitch… and cant stay off it.
You remain soft kid, couldn’t spit well with last lips
Sayin shits classic, laugh at your shitty attempts at graphics.
Make you backflip like acrobats, Not Iller you think thatll win
Moved to Shadowville like “why cant I beat Spyder at battlin”
Had that track written, claimin it’s a key, sayin I suck at flow
Leave you kicked out, like your mom did a few months ago.
“guys im done rapping and my family life sucks” wish it was true
haven’t put out audio thank god, who’d wanna listen to you,
this bitch is submissive, no James so he is on some dumb shit
said it himself.
James – gave me a style that I could run with.

Think you come sick, weak bars these supplements aint dietary
If you an MC cant be a rapper only option Mariah Carey.
He tries to scare me, obviously ima win against you
These drops keep hittin home like your parental issues.
Man please just stop droppin kosovic got you back on your knees
This is like gym class cole, we all laugh at your piece.
This kid inbred, keep your mouth shut respect this clip
I love the fact how you admit, “my text is shit”
Emcee’s just shutter, insomniac put you to sleep and smothered
Ill stop it short. I know it takes a while to read with the studder.
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Re: Get Hooked On Phonics(Coleon Diss)

Postby Spyder » Feb 21st, '10, 04:48

well u give credit wheres its due as will I

your piece was hott, but i still hear slurred words :whistle:
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