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Re: Coleon - Oh What A Tangled Web We've Wove...

Postby Spyder » Feb 21st, '10, 20:31

intro started off odd for me, but had some funny lines that made me chuckle
fat jokes kinda pointless though, i mean they just dont hit

good mixin it up, good personals

i was actually gonna use a line similar to you luger line, than i saw it on here and was like fuck

id say about even with your last drop

and the beef continues :coffee:
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Re: Coleon - Oh What A Tangled Web We've Wove...

Postby Spyder » Feb 21st, '10, 21:39

were not drawing anyone here :coffee:
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Re: Coleon - Oh What A Tangled Web We've Wove...

Postby mcZu » Feb 21st, '10, 21:47

I've gotta say that Cole has the upper hand right now. Sorry Spyder, you my nukka, but this diss was doper than yours. You gotta come back with something harder dude, pause.
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Re: Coleon - Oh What A Tangled Web We've Wove...

Postby Spyder » Feb 21st, '10, 21:49

lol love it how generals on coles nuts :flutter:
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Re: Coleon - Oh What A Tangled Web We've Wove...

Postby mcZu » Feb 21st, '10, 21:51

I'm on nobody's nuts, it's just the truth, take it or leave it Spyder. Don't be a dick, you wanna prove you're better than him? Then come back with something better than your last drop. I'm not saying Cole is better than you are in general, I'm just saying that this diss was better than yours.

Don't make us look bad Spyder, as a General you have a fucking job to come hard every time, pause.
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Re: Coleon - Oh What A Tangled Web We've Wove...

Postby classthe_king » Feb 21st, '10, 21:55

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Re: Coleon - Oh What A Tangled Web We've Wove...

Postby Spyder » Feb 21st, '10, 21:58

wasnt talkin bout you zu :coffee:
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Re: Coleon - Oh What A Tangled Web We've Wove...

Postby mcZu » Feb 21st, '10, 22:04

Okay, then we're good Spydie. :coffee:
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Re: Coleon - Oh What A Tangled Web We've Wove...

Postby 2sDay » Feb 22nd, '10, 04:12

what the fuck is this? :confusion:

no beer for this negus :n:
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Re: Coleon - Oh What A Tangled Web We've Wove...

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 22nd, '10, 04:17

Yeah I been watchin the beef, nothins really stuck out. This one is probably the best out of all of them. Some pretty good personals. Wanna see wat Spydie got up his sleeve :smoking:
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Postby gutawafang » Feb 22nd, '10, 04:19

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