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Strategy Leak (15 bars)

Postby mcZu » Feb 22nd, '10, 01:24

Yes, fifteen, not sixteen, not fourteen, just fifteen. Because I felt like it

I rep a killa-team, try keeping your heads on
Me losing is like Howard in a casket, dead wrong
I put my hat on, then I add on heat for this era
I’m a General, I fathered styles, I call ‘em Ciara
Vigilante, aint new, nor do I lean, I passed fine
Did it all alone, not one-side-kick like New Orleans after half time
Don’t try to fuck with me, like a cougar in my space
‘cause I could hit you mo’ often than googeling myspace
Why chase? Zu like Sticky from Onyx, I, lazy
I’m picky, skills? I own it, your chick? I lick-her call me Baileys
You don’t belong here, just move grounds like Haiti
Even if you had my passport picture you couldn’t face me
Holding me down is like a movie set, takes three-
Thousand, so I just astound my self with a victorious deep thread
Ideas pop out like D’s in a fake Victoria Secret...
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

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Re: Strategy Leak (15 bars)

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 22nd, '10, 01:54

15? lol loved that New Orleans line
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Re: Strategy Leak (15 bars)

Postby mcZu » Feb 22nd, '10, 02:02

Thanks Cole and Fa-Q, appreciate it.
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Re: Strategy Leak (15 bars)

Postby Spyder » Feb 22nd, '10, 03:35

dope shit zu, loved the wordplay in there
fav line was prob the face line :smoking:
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Re: Strategy Leak (15 bars)

Postby mcZu » Feb 22nd, '10, 12:26

Thanks Spydie.
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Re: Strategy Leak (15 bars)

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 22nd, '10, 15:05

Baileys and face line were :worship: Great little piece flowed really good
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Strategy Leak (15 bars)

Postby mcZu » Feb 22nd, '10, 18:41

Thanks Yah, 'preciate it.
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Re: Strategy Leak (15 bars)

Postby mcZu » Feb 24th, '10, 23:06

Thanks Steven.
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Re: Strategy Leak (15 bars)

Postby Doctor Skittlez » Feb 24th, '10, 23:29

Liked This Shit, Fam. You Def Got Skills. Liked The New Orleans Line, The Bailey's Line, N' The Myspace Shit. Dope, Fam, Dope.
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