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Postby Yah-hah » Feb 22nd, '10, 04:34

Ok I was just wondering about wat other rappers think about themselves. So just say wat your strengths in writing and your weaknesses. I'll start with mine first.

Strengths-Mutlies, I pretty much use them all the time. I basically hear nothing but multies when I rap, some say I force it but its my natural flow to rhyme that way.
Emotion-I know I do drop pieces that are just to bust alot of multies sometimes, but my serious songs have alot of emotion. My two best drops are pure emotion. IDK I just kinda naturally have a way to put emotion in text.

Weaknesses-Punches, yeah I think it's not that I can't come up with punches, it's just I like my songs to sound more natural so I pretty much just write without stoppin to think, therefore I dont usually put punches in. Don't get me wrong I love to see punches I just don't usually put them in there, my mind is mostly thinkin of dope mutlies than dope punches.
Structure- :laughing: Class is laughin right now. That man has been sayin how much it sucks since my very first drop (Which I'll even admit was the worst structure ever lol) When I rap aloud or in my head, thats how I write it down. Sometimes my flow changes speed and its not really easy to show during text, if you hear it out loud than you'll get the flow. Gettin a mic soon so look out for that.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
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Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Wat are your strengths and weaknesses?

Postby Solace » Feb 22nd, '10, 04:37

Strengths - Multies, Flow & Structure
Weaknesses - Everything else.
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Re: Wat are your strengths and weaknesses?

Postby classthe_king » Feb 22nd, '10, 04:41

Can't wait till you get a mic :8)

Strenghts- Flow, multis, conveying emotion.
Weakness-Vocab, creativity,
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Wat are your strengths and weaknesses?

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 22nd, '10, 04:45

Strengths - Multis, fucked up shit, weird song ideas, can do just about any song, vocab, wordplay,

Weaknesses - Flow (well to others, it flows in my mind), Structure, and my voice...when i rap i have this nasal....and i sound like the whitest kid ever aka delivery
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Re: Wat are your strengths and weaknesses?

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Feb 22nd, '10, 04:49

Strengths:
Imagination- I never cease to amaze myself with the crazy stuff I come up with
Multis- They come naturally to me
Originality- I never use hip hop lingo in my writing for a reason

Weaknesses:
Versatility- I almost exclusively write gore now
Punchlines- I don't consider it a weakness because I avoid them on purpose, but other writers will
Lack of connectivity- I have a hard time making my audience understand exactly what I'm trying to say, especially when I write emotional pieces (that's why I'm afraid to do them)
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Re: Wat are your strengths and weaknesses?

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 22nd, '10, 04:50

lol at Fa-q's voice, Yo Col wat you mean by ranting,
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Wat are your strengths and weaknesses?

Postby FAME » Feb 22nd, '10, 04:53

Strengths: Flow, Vocab, Range of Topics

Weaknesses: Punches & Mulits
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Re: Wat are your strengths and weaknesses?

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 22nd, '10, 04:56

FAME wrote:Strengths: Flow, Vocab, Range of Topics

Weaknesses: Punches & Mulits


You are really good with multies? You just dont drop very often
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Wat are your strengths and weaknesses?

Postby FAME » Feb 22nd, '10, 05:04

Yah-hah wrote:
FAME wrote:Strengths: Flow, Vocab, Range of Topics

Weaknesses: Punches & Mulits


You are really good with multies? You just dont drop very often


I know, that's why I put them in my weaknesses, because I don't use then often. Like I can do punches, but I don't do them very often :y:

:shifty: Makes me want to write a piece with just my weaknesses
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Re: Wat are your strengths and weaknesses?

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 22nd, '10, 05:10

Haha yeah I know wat you mean, hit me up for a collab sometime ma :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Wat are your strengths and weaknesses?

Postby shadyfreakzul » Feb 22nd, '10, 14:04

strength- multies, similies,
weakness- sometimes punches
I'm strong, my word is Bond like James
Niggaz be tryin to test, but they 'week' like seven days-Canibus

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like taekwondo you lack punches-Shadyfreakzul

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