Sleeping With A Broken Heart

[mcZu]

Wrote this one to Alicia Keys- Try Sleeping With A Broken Heart, it covers my feelings from a certain time period to right now.



My spirit left broken.. hard
Just try sleeping with a broken heart, it’s hard
Heart’s chambers broken, it all falls apart
And apart of that, it all falls like knowing it by heart
It seems my mind was in my chest, I start-
..to believe that my heart was in my head, art-
..like almost, rational feelings
Emotional thoughts, I fought for what I believed in
I was retrieving my feelings step by step
There’s just grief in the concealed steps, by that-
..I brief myself brief with that, except-
..My true feelings, a conclave underneath my ribs
I feel like a con claiming to be innocent using my lips
Talking nonsense through my verbal device
It’s a scent that depicts truth in circles, the ice-
..is melting, I’m not cold anymore, the wise-
..words I speak are aimed at me, it’s nice-
..to see that peak, and not being lonely on top anymore
Or am I rooting too fast? I hear ‘can he roar?’
So I’m back to my roots at a pace, with more feeling
Her spirit is already in my heart, I’m done keeping-
..these old memories holding me back, I’m deep in-
..a new memory, remember me, I’m seeking-
..Miss Gorgeous’ love, it’s in front me, I’m fending-
..these old thoughts, and I welcome the new ones
Hopefully much better than the old ones
And hopefully no more mister cold one
No more mister fold one, no more origami
Or Versace, I’m brand new, unfolded, or should I say a new page
I just turned the last one and put my pen on this new page..

[Medicine Ball]

this was good, i enjoyed the beginning the most.

[gutawafang]

Suits it well.

[Restlesswon]

nice one..deep

[Yah-hah]

I actually really dig this one alot. Idk why its got a nice feel to if, something alot of people can relate to. I'm diggin it Zu. Yo hit me up for a clash of the wolves pt 2 sometime

[j2dat]

deep. im feelin this one, look forward to seeing more

[*MIRANDA*]

i like it especially this part:

My spirit left broken.. hard
Just try sleeping with a broken heart, it’s hard
Heart’s chambers broken, it all falls apart
And apart of that, it all falls like knowing it by heart
It seems my mind was in my chest, I start-
..to believe that my heart was in my head, art-
..like almost, rational feelings
Emotional thoughts, I fought for what I believed in
I was retrieving my feelings step by step
There’s just grief in the concealed steps,

i could very much so relate to that
good job

[mcZu]

Thanks everybody, I appreciate the comments.

[mcZu]

Thanks Cole, 'preciate you taking the time reading it.

[Doctor Skittlez]

Dope Man! Fuckin' Dope! This That Real Shit, Right Here. Liked Every Last Bit Of It. Fuckin' Flow Was Dope, Vocab Was Hot, Fuck, Whole Piece Was Dope, Dope, Dope!

Other Than This Bar:

"Or Versace, I’m brand new, unfolded, or should I say a new page
I just turned the last one and put my pen on this new page.."
I Think You Coulda Done Wit'out The Repetition...

But Props On The Rest, Yo.

[mcZu]

Thanks Dr. Skittlez, 'preciate the comment man.