Follow Me (Full Song)

[Solace]

[Verse 1]
The moment she stepped in the pain had slowly injected,
Why? You see a guy like me had merely choked at rejection,
Friends had jokingly threatened, but I'd mope in depression,
Because right now I barely know who's in my own reflection,
And you think it's funny? Well I don't mind if you do,
Get wrapped in your own lives, I really got mine to pursue,
Now my timing is screwed 'cause I'm stuck in the sand still
Though I can't stand still, I'm just really stuck in a stand still,
Work, I've lost care for, I've seem to have lost the job, fired,
Concepts wreck my common sense, lost in thought, tired,
I need to satisfy this madder guy, I call him readers wit,
Need to sleep a bit though I also seem to need to weep a bit,
Soon as I see her lips, I need her kiss, I am doomed to struggle,
How could I be 5 Star when I can't manage to move a muscle,
Generally letters beam, seemingly wrecking me quite mentally,
They'll call out every name, never mind they'll be forgetting me.

[Chorus x2]
All of my vast thoughts are cast off, I'm driven to edge,
Hidden through the mesh, just living through a test,
I can't escape, thinking of plans gets my mind hollow see,
And no matter where I run, the pain happens to follow me.

[Verse 2]
I'm in a corner even when in the middle of an empty room,
The knives taking away lives seems a little too tempting too,
"I will be ending you" I hear my own mind whispering to me,
Sometimes I'm dumb, succumb to what it's wishing me to be,
A silthering disease, I'm lost, little chance I might be found,
I'm quite profound, this is the lightest of my writings now,
Wealth fades, a junkie for the self-hate, see myself and hide,
Though the stress pressed is best kept to me, myself and I,
What caused this constant stress? Try thinkin' but nothing starts,
Social life, the hoes I like, family problems and fuckin' marks,
Always since a kid I was known being sarcastic and an asshole,
Funny for a bit, nothing for a kid, now how far did that go?
A little crucial to myself, oh now I'm being crucial on cruciality,
Ironic, my god its loosely maddening, these stupid tragedies,
I write this with my left hand because I been stripped of my rights,
So I close my bedroom door shut and just flick off the lights.

[Chorus x2]
All of my vast thoughts are cast off, I'm driven to edge,
Hidden through the mesh, just living through a test,
I can't escape, thinking of plans get's my mind hollow see,
And no matter where I run, the pain happens to follow me.

[Cam Aura]

thats sick solace

love the concept of it man, dope mutlies and internals
good metas

solid drop

[DƎRDYPK]

that was dope....you should of made this longer
you know I'm a fan of that depressing stuff you write

[classthe_king]

This is dope as usual Glad to see your back

[Solace]

Thank you all. I'm surprised at the good feedback. And maybe I will do another verse to this Coleon, and edit the chorus if I can find ways to make it better or write a better chorus. Again, thanks guys.

[Medicine Ball]

nice nice nice, this was nice.

[gutawafang]

Good way of conversing. I like the storytelling here.

[Solace]

Thank you two. By the way I added another verse and tweaked the chorus but not much so it's not so apparent.

[gutawafang]

A little crucial to myself, oh now I'm being crucial on cruciality,
Ironic, my god its loosely maddening, these stupid tragedies,

and I like "knives" in a song.

[Relapse.LP]

Great verse, like usual.

Just maybe, switch up the flow/voice or something, making it less like a conversation.

Unless that was your point.

[Solace]

A little crucial to myself, oh now I'm being crucial on cruciality,
Ironic, my god its loosely maddening, these stupid tragedies,

and I like "knives" in a song.

Thanks Cliff, appreciated.

Great verse, like usual.

Just maybe, switch up the flow/voice or something, making it less like a conversation.

Unless that was your point.

Thank you. And by making it less like a conversation, do you mean like talking to myself? A little reflection? I tend to do that a lot by accident actually lol.

[Relapse.LP]

A little crucial to myself, oh now I'm being crucial on cruciality,
Ironic, my god its loosely maddening, these stupid tragedies,

and I like "knives" in a song.

Thanks Cliff, appreciated.

Great verse, like usual.

Just maybe, switch up the flow/voice or something, making it less like a conversation.

Unless that was your point.

Thank you. And by making it less like a conversation, do you mean like talking to myself? A little reflection? I tend to do that a lot by accident actually lol.

Nah, I meant to say: conversational. And yes, you do somewhat participate in soliloquies, but I got no problem with that.

I've always thought you was more a poet than a rapper, hence your overall usage of imagery rather than wordplay and punchlines. I mean that in a positive way. Keep it up, bro.