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My First Verse off "Back Words"

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My First Verse off "Back Words"

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 11th, '10, 07:12

I'm trying somethin new in my writing...its in each "couplet" there's something hidden...see if you can spot it :)


I want to see the recap of the pacer game,
I write a love song to a girl, but erase her name,
See yall don't know me, I have a level of clever,
But sometimes I'm retarded, and revel in the lever,
I flip you off, say "fuck you" said it and hide,
Moon your sorry ass, and see if I edit the tide,
I peed in the deep end, and scream "Shark in the water"
Your offsprings a bitch, so all I can do is bark at your daughter,
You see in there, there's a reward in that drawer,
My nude pictures, that's where I store the horror,
I fall victim to the arms, of the tender red net,
I shoot my capture, has the defender bled yet,
But see this, if just the first net trap, here comes part ten,
Let's see how I hold up, how about you feel my heart then,
Me and a puppy, at the vet, attempt to swap paws,
I have the best flow, the best multis, trying to top Nas,
Speaking of, you all know I got the flow of a wolf,
I feel illegal, flippin off mexico, then began to row for the golf,
I draw the ward, out of his office for a minute,
Strangle him with a bra and cord, in a closet, but the prophets in it,
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Re: My First Verse off "Back Words"

Postby Yah-hah » Jan 11th, '10, 08:29

Awe I been wonderin when you was gonna drop this. I dig it, I saw all of them I think. Thinking you clever smh :shakehead: .................. :D
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: My First Verse off "Back Words"

Postby Fa-Q » Jan 11th, '10, 13:22

Lol Jus...I wonder if anyone else has seen it?
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Re: My First Verse off "Back Words"

Postby Ka0t1c » Feb 24th, '10, 15:45

this is pretty nice, i love the pattern and how you use of your words
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: My First Verse off "Back Words"

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 24th, '10, 17:33

Kaotic wrote:this is pretty nice, i love the pattern and how you use of your words

Damn dude this is old but do you get the pattern
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Re: My First Verse off "Back Words"

Postby Yah-hah » Feb 24th, '10, 19:12

Yeah wats up with this not gettin any views??
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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