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My Dr. Skittlez Diss

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 27th, '10, 16:05

Well I guess this mafucker just evaporated...so no one got to see my verse and I'm pretty proud of it :D ...so here it is


You and Eminem are polar opposites, see your name is Skittle,
Your shameful, just stop the shit, and his shame is little,
Your soft on the inside, mafucka, but don't blame the middle,
Cause I'll carve your ass, cause I'm a tool, the same as a widdle,
You must of met Dark Blue, and sucked his cock tastin the rainbow,
You washed your mouth out, slut, but forgot to erase the stain though,
You should change your name to Elmo, Blue said just face the pain slow,
Now you got a hernia, just watch the fuckin pace of the strain grow,
Your fuckin pinky must be sore, always creepin over to Caps Lock,
Crush your skull, you'll want "Num"b lock, please make your raps stop,
Fake ass ganster, wearin' a bra, you couldn't have two straps, Doc?
Listening to Gangsters Para-dice, trying to play Craps with Pac,
When you masturbate, God gave you a small dick, he simply planned it,
Your like a frustrated police, mad you always come up empty handed,
So tell me, is my dick thoroughly in your mouth yet,
Cause you only know one letter, of the alphabet,
You only know "S", Skittles should be picky at best,
Cause your fuckin ass is like a cum stain, a sticky mess,
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Re: My Dr. Skittlez Diss

Postby Coherent » Feb 27th, '10, 16:59

This is pretty weak, punches we overall generic and very played. Not to much creativity here. Lacked multies. The only thing that was reasonable was the flow... but other than that I'd say up your game.
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Re: My Dr. Skittlez Diss

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 27th, '10, 17:05

Coherent wrote:This is pretty weak, punches we overall generic and very played. Not to much creativity here. Lacked multies. The only thing that was reasonable was the flow... but other than that I'd say up your game.

Punches...everything was straight punches? And multis I had nothing but multis...the flow was lacking imo...but thanks for the feed?
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Re: My Dr. Skittlez Diss

Postby Fa-Q » Feb 27th, '10, 17:11

Coleon wrote:
Fa-Q wrote:
Coherent wrote:This is pretty weak, punches we overall generic and very played. Not to much creativity here. Lacked multies. The only thing that was reasonable was the flow... but other than that I'd say up your game.

Punches...everything was straight punches? And multis I had nothing but multis...the flow was lacking imo...but thanks for the feed?


they prefer complex multies as opposed to amount

and yes you had alot of punches but none were really hard hitting

good drop any Fa-Q, keep it up bro

I don't see how you can have a personnal when you don't know anybody across the internet.

And complex....I had 4 syllables crossing nearly everytime


Btw I'm not annoyed just a curious boy *peers into womens restroom*
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Re: My Dr. Skittlez Diss

Postby Coherent » Feb 27th, '10, 17:22

None of those punches made me go ohh... Gay jokes (Which are actually personal since Skitz is actually gay, really), but still, they are very simple and not really witty, I saw one wordplay, which was ok, but the punch to it was not very hard hitting.

I peeped Coleon's battle with him, he had more of the same stuff but he had that sick DS line. I don't battle like this, nor even write like this so its doesn't really come off as good to me.

As for multies. Yeah, you has some 4 syllable in there that were nice and made the flow, but it didn't have inner multies and they were just really plain overall. But I guess that was an understatement of mine saying you lacked them, because you did have them, they just were not great multies that eye pop you know.
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Re: My Dr. Skittlez Diss

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Feb 27th, '10, 22:32

Fa-Q wrote:Punches...everything was straight punches? And multis I had nothing but multis...the flow was lacking imo...but thanks for the feed?

That interrogation point wasn't necessary.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12

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