Randomness without thought

[Just Silver]

Sicko psycho sickle dipped in Nyquil
sleepy deaths that i kill sip a sip of
my will, which is wicked hydro besides
those who might go,no i dont like this sideshow
my mind goes with the sideshow i let my insides go
dont care about a liver i lived a day quicker
shake like mr Vicker im baked like Christmas dinner
too late im this bigger, telepathic lizard
cool blooded with a, tool summoned witch of
the East of directions get Kief and rest with,
a little dash of a half little quart from the port
paragraph of some sort time to all get aboard
im just out of my gourd i hoard my trees of outdoors
exsqueeze my manly front source slip it into a whore
pipsqueak the peppery paprika fucking salt in the ass
kill steve blue and magenta at the scene of the crime
no more clues to find through my fool proof design

[Heffernan]

First- I hate the word "keystyle" so plz pick a diff word :|

Second-its not bad...but its wayyyyy to heavily relapse inspired...that's all I could think of while reading it

Apart from that...with the right flow its good...but just too eminem-inspired

[Heffernan]

Better already