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Pyromaniac Penmanship

Postby classthe_king » Feb 28th, '10, 19:25

I re-wrote my verse

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Were fighting fire with fire like it’s a pyro-brawl
Everything you spit doesn’t exist like the gyro ball
I go all out on tracks like the beaches in France
Lyrical combustion, I incinerate the weak at a glance
I leap at the chance to do a track cause I spit it faster
Blazin the mic cause I flow hotter than liquid plasma
The horrid lines n torrid rhymes leave ya jaw broken
I'm so hot when im done spittin my jaw’s smokin
He draws close n’ feels the flames when at a far
When I hit the stage, I lit a blaze like a massive star
When I rap a hitting my level's an emcees wish
The heat n’ pressure released it fresher, it's igneous
The bitch resists what he can take from the best
I cauterize the mic when words escape from my breath
I equate with the death of the witches in Salem
We toss all opponents into the ditches n blaze em
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Pyromaniac Penmanship

Postby classthe_king » Feb 28th, '10, 19:43

Our first collab :flutter:
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Re: Pyromaniac Penmanship

Postby Arabian Shady » Feb 28th, '10, 22:57

this was absolutely dope man, really liked this drop
i remember anon havin a similar topic a couple of months bacl
great multies, excellent flow, nice use of verbosity :b:
Dope :b:
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: Pyromaniac Penmanship

Postby classthe_king » Feb 28th, '10, 23:44

Arabian Shady wrote:this was absolutely dope man, really liked this drop
i remember anon havin a similar topic a couple of months bacl
great multies, excellent flow, nice use of verbosity :b:
Dope :b:


Thanks alot :worship:
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Re: Pyromaniac Penmanship

Postby Spyder » Mar 1st, '10, 01:16

love it man, miss the original shit was dope.

basically whats been said above :y:
ps love the new sig
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Re: Pyromaniac Penmanship

Postby classthe_king » Mar 1st, '10, 21:14

Thanks spy :flower:
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Re: Pyromaniac Penmanship

Postby Coherent » Mar 1st, '10, 22:41

Yeah, probably the best piece I've seen on this site. Very audio-ish, but it definitely had some complexity to it. Nice multies, inner and outer. Flow was on point the whole piece. Rhyme scheme was solid and kept it smooth. Real nice overall duke.
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Re: Pyromaniac Penmanship

Postby WhatsAnEnigma » Mar 1st, '10, 22:58

I personally don't like the topic: Fire and being so hot and bringing heat just seems played out, and even though you show lyrical skill a whole verse on it was too much para mi.
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Re: Pyromaniac Penmanship

Postby classthe_king » Mar 1st, '10, 23:42

Thanks coherent :worship:


WhatsAnEnigma wrote:I personally don't like the topic: Fire and being so hot and bringing heat just seems played out, and even though you show lyrical skill a whole verse on it was too much para mi.


It was just a fun collab me and Coleon did when I just started writing, but I appreciate the feed.
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Re: Pyromaniac Penmanship

Postby Spyder » Mar 2nd, '10, 00:06

WhatsAnEnigma wrote:I personally don't like the topic: Fire and being so hot and bringing heat just seems played out, and even though you show lyrical skill a whole verse on it was too much para mi.


who you :confusion: rapdog im guessing
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Re: Pyromaniac Penmanship

Postby WhatsAnEnigma » Mar 2nd, '10, 00:13

Spyder wrote:
WhatsAnEnigma wrote:I personally don't like the topic: Fire and being so hot and bringing heat just seems played out, and even though you show lyrical skill a whole verse on it was too much para mi.


who you :confusion: rapdog im guessing


No, but it seems you're displeased as to my opinion on the topic...?
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Re: Pyromaniac Penmanship

Postby Spyder » Mar 2nd, '10, 00:21

no

just didnt know ya...
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