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Attempt at Multis (Death > Jail)

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Attempt at Multis (Death > Jail)

Postby Artille » Mar 1st, '10, 23:52

I remember having a thought of cooking crack in a pot
I knew that I would make a lot, but I might lose all I got
Cause if I got caught it would completely change my plot
and setting, Just laying in a jail cell with no bedding
Never have kids or a wedding, I would rather suffer beheading
so there's no thoughts of where I'm heading and what's ahead
So don't throw me in jail, just kill me, I would rather be dead
I would rather you take my life, than take me from my life
With no dream of a child or wife, here's the knife......


Only did 2 multis max. But it's a start. Feedback?
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Re: Attempt at Multis (Death > Jail)

Postby Enimee » Mar 1st, '10, 23:54

wheeere?
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Re: Attempt at Multis (Death > Jail)

Postby WhatsAnEnigma » Mar 1st, '10, 23:58

Better, but don't devote your life to multi's as I said.
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Re: Attempt at Multis (Death > Jail)

Postby Artille » Mar 2nd, '10, 00:04

WhatsAnEnigma wrote:Better, but don't devote your life to multi's as I said.

Yeah I know. That's why toward the end the multis started to diminish. Gonna try and mix them both next verse, but for now... 106 and Park...
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Re: Attempt at Multis (Death > Jail)

Postby WhatsAnEnigma » Mar 2nd, '10, 00:14

People still watch BET?..oh my
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Re: Attempt at Multis (Death > Jail)

Postby Artille » Mar 2nd, '10, 00:19

WhatsAnEnigma wrote:People still watch BET?..oh my

lol

Roger That and Girl I Got You are premiering. Afterwards, I'm gonna work on another verse.
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