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Me, Myself & I

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Me, Myself & I

Postby Solace » Mar 2nd, '10, 01:40

So in Kindergarten as soon as I walked in the class,
I yelled and cried, saying that I'm not gunna pass,
I was right, and all these thoughts from the past,
Truthfully proves to me that gunshots aren't bad,
Just like shots from a glass. I was thought inferior,
Phase me? That's crazy. Nah, that's a hard exterior,
'Cause with a fake smile, nothing could go wrong,
And oh I was so wrong yet I kept it up for so long,
So here's a joke song, 'cause a joke equals what I am,
Like how I'm forgotten more than all the stuff I cram,
I'm not noticed, yet little mistakes are known so well,
Pile up embarrassment, bring it for a show and tell,
While the times are tough, always cried too much,
A thing about myself is I've always whined too much,
Smart advice in this car of life, even if the ride is rough,
I'm sorry for the fact that I've never even tried enough.

Depression is closest to resting,
I just hate it you see.
It's what I see in my reflection.
And just what I hate is me.
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Re: Me, Myself & I

Postby gutawafang » Mar 2nd, '10, 01:52

Man, I feel that. But why is it in the shoes of a kindergarten kid? :sweating:

Ok, nevermind that. I think it's pretty emotional. The last stanza is the best. The hook, I think. LOL. Overall, a good read, pretty easy to understand. :y:
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Re: Me, Myself & I

Postby Solace » Mar 2nd, '10, 02:05

It wasn't in the shoes of a kindergarten kid, it was a reference about me in first day of kindergarten (which actually happened, funny actually; I kicked the Principal and tried to run bahaha)

But thank you, glad you liked it bro. :flower:
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Re: Me, Myself & I

Postby DƎRDYPK » Mar 2nd, '10, 02:07

haha nice story Solace :smoking:
I like :y:
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Re: Me, Myself & I

Postby Solace » Mar 2nd, '10, 04:28

Thanks. :wub:
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Re: Me, Myself & I

Postby DƎRDYPK » Mar 2nd, '10, 04:29

no problem lil homie :smoking:
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