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10 Scrap Lines

Postby Solace » Mar 2nd, '10, 01:21

Got too bored, didnt want to finish them. Meh.

Fight me, it's enticing the way you make me guilty,
Slap me, harass me, train my mind state to be filthy,
This relationship, I should've been smarter about that,
Frame is robbed, game is lost, caught in a mouse trap,
It's kind of funny how, I love the way you used me,
Already figured it all out by the day full truth beamed,
There's something about you though, hate me more,
Makes me run back for a fun lap with a racy whore,
Make me cry the way you lie, it's a rotten tooth,
Thought of you? Nah, hun I ain't been bothered to.
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Re: 10 Scrap Lines

Postby gutawafang » Mar 2nd, '10, 01:22

LMAO at your avy. :laughing:

Make me cry the way you lie, it's a rotten tooth,
^Quite a good punch, I think and it can be polished. :y:

Overall, quite good with quite good multis.
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Re: 10 Scrap Lines

Postby Enimee » Mar 2nd, '10, 01:23

hot shyt for some scrap lines
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Re: 10 Scrap Lines

Postby Just Silver » Mar 2nd, '10, 02:40

Scrap lines in progress can make some really good pieces in the future

It was decent but pretty much could tell it was written just to be written NAMSAYN
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Re: 10 Scrap Lines

Postby Solace » Mar 2nd, '10, 04:27

Thanks bros! :worship:

And yeah JS, it was pretty forced. Guess thats why I didnt feel like finishing.
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