Flyte - A Psycho's Path

[gutawafang]

I got a headache reading only the first verse. LOL.

[gutawafang]

Alright man. To be honest man, I didn't like it because it's too much. The words you use are too heavy. It requires me to pause and think at every line. So, if I pause too much, I can't rap it out well and it affects the enjoyment of the lyrics.

[gutawafang]

Alright man. To be honest man, I didn't like it because it's too much. The words you use are too heavy. It requires me to pause and think at every line. So, if I pause too much, I can't rap it out well and it affects the enjoyment of the lyrics.

no problem bro thanks for peeping it

this is just one of my favorite styles of writing atm, I love spazzing out

Word man. I do like some anyways. Keep it coming.

[Fa-Q]

I couldn't get the flow, but its probably because I'm an illiterate fuck ....I understand about leftovers, I'm surpised I don't ever post leftovers so I applaud you. And like Fish said the word play is high but still good. Good drop Co.

[Tash8]

pretty bad imo...seems like you just wrote rhymes down and then tried to put them together to make a song..

I'd like to hear you record this, after one take you'll realize this style isn't really worth much.

the rhymes are pretty good nonetheless, nice vocab--just learn to use it better..it's not about who can spit the biggest and baddest, it's all about using the right one at the right time.

[classthe_king]

Are you going with the name Flyte?

[WhatsAnEnigma]

I'd like to hear this rapped to that beat, either you're Twista Jr. or very good with regulating your breathing.

[Fa-Q]

Is your new name flyte?

[Fa-Q]

Are you going with the name Flyte?

nope still Coleon, it was from another site, I just copy and pasted it

*wipes sweat away from eyebrow*