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Last Chance(Esmart Diss)

Postby ChronicJon » Mar 4th, '10, 01:16

{Last Chance}

so you startin' beef?, well i'll give you a war,
thinkin' you unstoppable cuz you won a couple battles, well who's keepin' score?,
fucking 13 years old still scared of chucky, when your 40 years still wont be gettin' lucky,
lieng behind my back, we suppose be friends the shit you do got me hooked on that crack,
witcha hoe ass mom, workin late nights and gets paid in cash,
call her back to my crib to gimmie some ASS,
i'll be 32 ridin' pimped out Ford's, you be 33 producin' shitty as record's,
just a average joe, more like a shorty witta choed,
im dissin' you on your own "game", "13 and ambitious" that i gotta disclaim,
you'll never be shit, thinkin' you gonna get riches and fame,
sell your soul to the devil thats a good proclaim, there was no need for that faking,
that wasnt a joke it was a desicion making, you know what am talkin bout,
that ain't cool, just got you lookin' like a lonely ass fool,
guess thats what you'll be, brotha just apologize, stop tryin' to hide,
we been homeys for life, i don't want that to end by me stabbin' you witha knife,
unless you wanna continue this beef, then i'll still come out on top likea police chief,
but if you know its you thats trippin' then its gonna be a big relief, for you,

so you wanna apologize fagmart? :angry:
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Re: Last Chance(Esmart Diss)

Postby gutawafang » Mar 4th, '10, 02:33

LOL. I dont see Esmart around anymore eh. :sweating:
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Re: Last Chance(Esmart Diss)

Postby X'ed Up » Mar 4th, '10, 04:52

lol idk who ur dissing but...... :sweating:

it was neither a good song or diss :whistle:

plus some bars didn't rhyme :coffee:
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Re: Last Chance(Esmart Diss)

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Mar 4th, '10, 05:28

What does he have to apologize for?
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12

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Re: Last Chance(Esmart Diss)

Postby ChronicJon » Mar 4th, '10, 22:37

coming from a nooby :whistle:
X'ed Up wrote:lol idk who ur dissing but...... :sweating:

it was neither a good song or diss :whistle:

plus some bars didn't rhyme :coffee:
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Re: Last Chance(Esmart Diss)

Postby X'ed Up » Mar 4th, '10, 23:03

ChronicJon wrote:coming from a nooby :whistle:
X'ed Up wrote:lol idk who ur dissing but...... :sweating:

it was neither a good song or diss :whistle:

plus some bars didn't rhyme :coffee:

I have more posts than you so ur the "noobie" and I can defiantly make a better song/diss than that thing you call a diss :coffee:
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