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Re: For a FT.

Postby shadeonback » Mar 5th, '10, 16:53

shit was aite but you need to get soulja boy on it

yall can suck a dick

edited as you asked for
Last edited by shadeonback on Mar 5th, '10, 17:03, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: For a FT.

Postby AbramIsaac » Mar 5th, '10, 17:02

shadeonback wrote:shit was aite but you need to get soulja boy on it

Wow, you just said a stupid comment to the GOD of TR.

You permanently suck.

I don't normally do CW reviews, but it's good, as always McMaybe. :y:
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Re: For a FT.

Postby shadeonback » Mar 5th, '10, 17:02

your 13067 posts talks by themselves i'm not even answering to you anymore, you should get a life my friend ;).

i'm out .
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Re: For a FT.

Postby Arabian Shady » Mar 5th, '10, 17:12

That was allmost poetic, i like the concept of the verse, i like the way you structured it too
your vocabulary,flow,style is as good as ever.
A quality Mc Maybe verse :b:
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Re: For a FT.

Postby Kosovic » Mar 5th, '10, 17:13

McMaybe wrote:
shadeonback wrote:shit was aite but you need to get soulja boy on it


I have no tolerance for stupidity. Either edit your post with a serious (negative or positive) response, or I'll issue a waring for insubordination and pointless spam. Now, we both know you have a meaningless existence with little or nothing to spend your wasted time on, so how about we don't get banned from the only place you feel well and accepted visiting. Besides the doctor that treats your halitosis.


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Re: For a FT.

Postby classthe_king » Mar 5th, '10, 20:48

wow, this was great :worship:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: For a FT.

Postby Yah-hah » Mar 5th, '10, 23:14

:worship: First two lines really set up the whole thing/ Multies were fire bro :y:
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Re: For a FT.

Postby gutawafang » Mar 6th, '10, 12:51

Man, your vocab is crazy. :o

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Gotta love it man. Very complex but comprehend-able. Good man. :worship:
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Re: For a FT.

Postby Steve Spag » Mar 13th, '10, 22:56

Possibly one of the greatest things written by a human to this date. I can't wait 'til we unleash hell on these fuckers LOL.
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Re: For a FT.

Postby classthe_king » Mar 13th, '10, 23:43

Steve Spag wrote:Possibly one of the greatest things written by a human to this date. I can't wait 'til we unleash hell on these fuckers LOL.


:o :o :o :o :o :o
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Re: For a FT.

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 14th, '10, 10:10

McMaybe wrote:My 1300 posts talks by themselves? You mean they talk by themselves? No they do not sir, I talk. Or, type, actually. They cannot speak, they are posts. I won't even comment on the second error.


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