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Band of Friendship from Ethel

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Band of Friendship from Ethel

Postby gutawafang » Mar 6th, '10, 13:06

B ut what if a song starts with a fucking question?
A question with the purpose of interaction
N othing to do with the title, and now the whole stanza
D oesn’t it affect the riddle and the whole answer?
O h yes, it does, with the whole Ecstacy that stimulates
F uck it, what the fuck am I trying to fucking emulate?
F or whatever this is that’s in my heart for you
R ipped just to see if I’m cut out for you
I ntentionally making it sound like I do love you
E xactly like that other guy who loves you
N ow that it’s already verbalized, what more can I say?
D amn, I suggest you just ignore what I say
S oon, it’ll be over, this is just a recurring tragedy
H appened once, but graduation erases it magically
I n the end, there’s no point writing this, it’s just a band
P lease accept it though, cuz I wanna end it while I still can
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Re: Band of Friendship from Ethel

Postby gutawafang » Mar 10th, '10, 00:33

Francesco10 wrote:Props, it's pretty original. Is it Rap or R&B though cuz it comes more relaxed in my head?
Dope anyway.

I not so sure what genre it is. LOL. I just wanted to write it. Thanks a lot man. :)
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