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basics of Society (N.E.W)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 7th, '10, 21:35

we have wars & cancers, without moral answers,
and people choosing sides as the bullets clamber.
like foodless campers left in the dark of coldness,
we all have dreams & hardly hearts to hope with.
the hopeless and unkind acts enslaved to hoods,
as if the trends of today said do away with good.
decay it would as if made of wood, so sad it was,
to notice over years this cliche of evil inhabit us.
savage thus, its bad enough, noticed it goes not,
he who cast the first stone is below his own rock.
knowing not they judge, & regretfully it is a fact,
grudges spawn, & so an awful art of getting back.
exists a path amidst the wrath, I belong to fright,
the fact that our own trap is just beyond our sight.
no wrong from right, so long as would life have it,
strong confides among a tide of anti-christ habits.
strife addicts so unlike passive, they hurt for hate,
justice acts & freedom divides the church & state.
who would have this savage mass who acts alone,
but to be exact,this was passed by half the globe.
civil acts bestowed so not heard will be no voice,
as unspoken lifes die by mothers whos pro-choice.
a globe moist to unknown joys, such trouble its in,
as our own ploys ensure it to only crumble within.
bundles of sin glow under the dim, a plots in turn,
as we so jump to attend the might of Gods return.
bright it burns, my life, as now i not doubt things,
as for the moment, and with these words. . .
i found peace.


all Feed Will Be Returned :flower:
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Re: basics of Society (N.E.W)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 7th, '10, 21:50

Francesco10 wrote:I'm happy with it most of it because it's about reality and struggle. Good rhyming brother I wish I could hear that. :y:


thanks bro for da feed , glad u liked it , for the recording , this gonna be my next track , but for now , i'm practicing some new technique and staff in producin in order to put hight quality songs , and i'm waiting for a new mic to arrive, ,, so ya , it's gonna be soon ,, and thanks for ya concern ,, bro ,, much appreciated

Francesco10 wrote:Forgot to give you big ups for your signature, eventhough I'm romanista.


i love ,, roma ,, i dont hate em ,, but my team is juve , but i'm encouraging ya so you can ,, be the 1st on da league , insead of inter,, cuz damn , i hate em so much ,,,,,,,,,, and francesco is my second favorite player,,,, much respect for u dude
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Re: basics of Society (N.E.W)

Postby Just Silver » Mar 7th, '10, 22:22

great piece multis loaded and structure is good

overall 9.4/10 :y:
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Postby classthe_king » Mar 7th, '10, 22:49

Wow, this was insane man. One of the best pieces I've seen in AWHILE. Keep posting and don't leave again :angry:
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: basics of Society (N.E.W)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 9th, '10, 12:38

Francesco10 wrote:
Slim Zaddy wrote:
Francesco10 wrote:I'm happy with it most of it because it's about reality and struggle. Good rhyming brother I wish I could hear that. :y:


thanks bro for da feed , glad u liked it , for the recording , this gonna be my next track , but for now , i'm practicing some new technique and staff in producin in order to put hight quality songs , and i'm waiting for a new mic to arrive, ,, so ya , it's gonna be soon ,, and thanks for ya concern ,, bro ,, much appreciated

Francesco10 wrote:Forgot to give you big ups for your signature, eventhough I'm romanista.


i love ,, roma ,, i dont hate em ,, but my team is juve , but i'm encouraging ya so you can ,, be the 1st on da league , insead of inter,, cuz damn , i hate em so much ,,,,,,,,,, and francesco is my second favorite player,,,, much respect for u dude


It's very good overall but it got me cuz it's actually lyrical rather than comercial. I'm a lot into lyrics, if it was Soulja Boy kinda of a song I'd spit some venom agaisnt it. LOL That's why I thought it'd sound nice and would like to hear it when you're done with it.

At this point and this time Totti and Del Piero are bigger than their clubs and unfortunately even Italy doesn't have a slight chance to win the World cup in the summer without them. Both are icons that represent their teams for a few generations of people like you and me.



yeah ,, i got ya ,,,,,,,,,,, thanks again man ,, :y: and yeah del piero and totti are the best ,, in italy ,, , peace

Just Silver wrote:great piece multis loaded and structure is good

overall 9.4/10 :y:


much appreciated Just Silver ,,, glad u liked it :worship: :worship:



classthe_king wrote:Wow, this was insane man. One of the best pieces I've seen in AWHILE. Keep posting and don't leave again :angry:



you bro ,, yeah it's been a long time my friend :'( , happy you liked it that much :worship: ,, :flower: :flower: ,,,,,,,, and i will my friend ,,maybe a collab me and you will sounds gooooooood,, what do u think ,, ?? ,,,,,
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Re: basics of Society (N.E.W)

Postby Fa-Q » Mar 9th, '10, 21:24

Loved this piece Zaddy...first line left me hooked all the way through...good drop
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Re: basics of Society (N.E.W)

Postby gutawafang » Mar 10th, '10, 07:09

:laughing: LOL.

I'm so fucking inspired by your structure man that I can't help it but LOL. It's really like,

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Like a stable building. HAHAHAHA. Nice structure, really. :worship:

Your rhyme scheme is diffrent from what you used to do. It's still good though, flows abit not good.

The multis is just :worship:

Cool shit man. :flower:
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Re: basics of Society (N.E.W)

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Mar 10th, '10, 07:55

Hey, this is fantastic.
It's quite peaceful, serene and inspiring.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12

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Re: basics of Society (N.E.W)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 12th, '10, 21:13

thanks everybody ,, much appreciated , glad you liked it ,, guys ,,,,,,,,,, guta , lol ,,,,,,,, bro , thanks
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Re: basics of Society (N.E.W)

Postby AOBrien09 » Mar 12th, '10, 23:38

Damn that was good, damn you got a good rhyming scheme and structure, love how none of your multies sound forced at all, deep drop, I like it :y:
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Re: basics of Society (N.E.W)

Postby Ticalrecords » Mar 13th, '10, 06:54

damn son do work! that shit was def nice def worth recording. the ending could not have been done better. props dude foreal
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Re: basics of Society (N.E.W)

Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 15th, '10, 15:40

thanks ,, guys ,,, much appreciated ,,,, :worship: :worship: ,, glad you liked it all
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