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An Innocent Boy's Requiem (Diss)

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An Innocent Boy's Requiem (Diss)

Postby Solace » Mar 2nd, '10, 23:46

Let's just call it attitude when I start to stab at you,
Worse than when you started, hence no one collabs with you,
I'll make my meal your shine so that you feel declined,
Only thing gangster about you is that you stealing lines,
You can't deal with rhymes? 'Cause you rapping dumber,
Fuck yourself, find someone else to make ya album covers,
Ain't even got homies to respect you, you're next dude,
Dead to me. Rep you, please. Ya can't even afford fresh foods,
No one accepts you, and nobody cares what you write,
Trailer trash, impale your back, you make the stereotypes,
I'll leave you dealt with, not understanding what this realm is,
Bitch, you couldn't kill the ice, even if it let you melt it,
Kinda crap his lines are wack and his mind is empty to me,
Because really guys he's the worst an emcee can be,
You got talent? Use it. It's even sort of sad to tooth this,
It's mad the truth is I'll leave him worn out as a toothpick,
Before you said I bit both Spag and MC Anonymous,
You're just mad that I fucking beat you before the start of it,
Your skill is Microsoft and I had just Excell-ed from it,
Leaving me to be intrigued and reveled in my devil wit,
In the worst ways I hurt, slay. You're even alone on ya birthdays,
I can't take your power...you ain't have it in the first place.

Lol. :onehandweight:
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Re: An Innocent Boy's Requiem (Diss)

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Mar 2nd, '10, 23:50

How does it feel to be in love?
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12

-Chaos zawladnal światem po raz kolejny-
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Re: An Innocent Boy's Requiem (Diss)

Postby Solace » Mar 2nd, '10, 23:59

Pardon?
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Re: An Innocent Boy's Requiem (Diss)

Postby Requiem » Mar 3rd, '10, 00:15

what the hell nukka thems fightin words :boxing:
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Re: An Innocent Boy's Requiem (Diss)

Postby Steve Spag » Mar 8th, '10, 01:04

No hate on Requiem, but THIS was one of the hottest things I've read in a LONG time.
Anyone who battles should take notes because that is how it's done!
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Re: An Innocent Boy's Requiem (Diss)

Postby Kosovic » Mar 8th, '10, 01:05

Your skill is Microsoft and i just excell-ed you?

Noooooo man, just no.
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Re: An Innocent Boy's Requiem (Diss)

Postby Solace » Mar 9th, '10, 23:16

Kosovic wrote:Your skill is Microsoft and i just excell-ed you?

Noooooo man, just no.

Lol @ you, you actually read it.

Thanks Spag for the support, though I'm quite surprised considering this was a quick 5 minute diss for fun.
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Re: An Innocent Boy's Requiem (Diss)

Postby Tash8 » Mar 9th, '10, 23:32

Only thing black about you is that you stealing lines, (haha)

racist and not funny

but the rest was dope. Nice diss
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Re: An Innocent Boy's Requiem (Diss)

Postby Solace » Mar 9th, '10, 23:34

Thanks bro, I figured some would take offense I really don't know why I didn't just change it to be "gangster" or something but yeah, props on checking it.
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Re: An Innocent Boy's Requiem (Diss)

Postby Tash8 » Mar 9th, '10, 23:41

Solace wrote:Thanks bro, I figured some would take offense I really don't know why I didn't just change it to be "gangster" or something but yeah, props on checking it.


what does it have to do with gangsters? you basically said black people steal things, which is racist. Only reason I pointed it out...
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Re: An Innocent Boy's Requiem (Diss)

Postby Solace » Mar 9th, '10, 23:42

Gangsters steal stuff, no?

And I realize it is racist now, I was reaching for a joke before which is pretty stupid. I apologize.
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Re: An Innocent Boy's Requiem (Diss)

Postby Tash8 » Mar 10th, '10, 00:12

Solace wrote:Gangsters steal stuff, no?

And I realize it is racist now, I was reaching for a joke before which is pretty stupid. I apologize.


sorry i misread what you wrote earlier...but yeah ... besides that i thought this was a good piece bro
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Re: An Innocent Boy's Requiem (Diss)

Postby X'ed Up » Mar 10th, '10, 00:22

In the worst ways I hurt, slay. You're even alone on ya birthdays,
I can't take your power...you ain't have it in the first place.

Eminem :whistle:

anyways great diss bro but i had to point that out :sweating:
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Re: An Innocent Boy's Requiem (Diss)

Postby Solace » Mar 10th, '10, 00:43

Tash8 wrote:
Solace wrote:Gangsters steal stuff, no?

And I realize it is racist now, I was reaching for a joke before which is pretty stupid. I apologize.


sorry i misread what you wrote earlier...but yeah ... besides that i thought this was a good piece bro

S'all good, and thanks.

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In the worst ways I hurt, slay. You're even alone on ya birthdays,
I can't take your power...you ain't have it in the first place.

Eminem :whistle:

anyways great diss bro but i had to point that out :sweating:

Lol, just remembered that. Referred to how Requiem puts up videos of his birthdays on Youtube and in them he's alone just to let you know though. Thanks.
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Re: An Innocent Boy's Requiem (Diss)

Postby X'ed Up » Mar 10th, '10, 00:46

It's cool bro :y:

that out of the way i liked this diss :smoking:
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