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Nothin On You

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Nothin On You

Postby LLockhart86 » Mar 11th, '10, 10:03

(This beat - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rfp8dhLEjUI - Spit the same speed bob does on this song)

Another song for you, but its all about me/
See this is how i feel when im watchin you sleep/
watchin you breathe and watchin the sheets/
float up and down while your caught up in your dreams/
i miss my past but its all dead and gone/
see i dropped to my knees one day and begged god/
Can you please help cuz I aint livin good at all/
and it seems that my prayer was answered after all/
3 months old and your all i think about/
tryna get a better job so I can get us in a house/
and your moms so proud, I can see it in her eyes/
Love, trust, patience, I'm/
On a whole other level/
Never thought anything could be so special/
But I got a baby boy, and we named him Malakai/
I guess this is how it feels when you feel like your alive/

Beautiful boy...
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Re: Nothin On You

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Mar 12th, '10, 08:35

Beautiful. I can sense the love you two share through your writing.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12

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Re: Nothin On You

Postby LLockhart86 » Mar 12th, '10, 18:27

Thanks. Sometimes I get to wanting to write....

Never would try rappin though, but its nice to write some shit sometimes.
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