At The Moment

[tjb]

never really wrote like a rap with any sort of story before so this is my 1st try


blunt in my mouth, ass in my hand
at the moment i am feeling allllllll-ritttttte
bumpin this jam, just doing my dance
at the moment i am feeling allll rittttte
at the moment i am feeling alll ritttte
at the moment i am feeling alll rite
at the moment-

here i am bottle of yaq in the hand,
bunch of girls around that can barely stand
sounds like the eqation to get down
maby take advantage of there alcoholic trance
so i walk up to one, more like stumble to sober some
im like hey miss lady, baby ima make you cum
now in the normal situation, i might have gotten slapped
but in places like this, lines like that, getchu ass
so shes like hey sexy, but then she throws up,
im like fuck, you stupid cunt, go an clean that shit up
so i move onto the next one, with a dumb,devilish grin
desperate, hellbent, on getting it in
shes a blonde, short skirt, no panties on
bodies asking to git fucked, so i ask her whats up
shes already a bit drunk but i give her another cup
sips, and strips right there, asking can you get it up?
to the window to the wall im about to get sucked

at the moment i am feeling allllllll-ritttttte
bumpin this jam, just doing my dance
at the moment i am feeling allll rittttte
at the moment i am feeling alll ritttte
at the moment i am feeling alll rite
at the moment- (more coming)

[BILI]

Chorus is way to simple...you need more multies...I`m not sure if you even have any...and your rhyme scheme is kinda weird...practice more and you`ll get it

[tjb]

Chorus is way to simple...you need more multies...I`m not sure if you even have any...and your rhyme scheme is kinda weird...practice more and you`ll get it

like i said ive never wrote any story raps before
an this wasnt meant to serious. obvi
i dont really think it matters if a chorus is simple
an yes thereis multies.

[BILI]

Chorus is way to simple...you need more multies...I`m not sure if you even have any...and your rhyme scheme is kinda weird...practice more and you`ll get it

like i said ive never wrote any story raps before
an this wasnt meant to serious. obvi
i dont really think it matters if a chorus is simple
an yes thereis multies.

show me some multies??there are lines that dont even rhyme