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The journey of a bored - FREESTYLE

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The journey of a bored - FREESTYLE

Postby Banks » Mar 15th, '10, 01:10

I'm very bored, so I did that shit :y:

== ENGLISH ==

Man, you see it, I need to drop bombs
For this tedio pass quickly I get some mines
I know that none of this will chime in English
But fuck it then, I do poetry in Portuguese

And then you can think of that will do later
When the dawn, the cold hit, you will see that all this shit burns
The cold will hit but will not hurt as much as my rhyme
You feel burning on your skin because the cold is not already over

Like, do not have shit to do, then I do it for me Leanin
Fuck you if you do not like, you know that I do not care if you do not hear me
At least I do not freestyles speaking of food
I prefer to talk things happen, do it on the effect of drink

This is not anything to be cool, just to express myself
There are many ideas in mind, I do not know where I came to stop
I have no idea where I am, but I tell you I'm not the guilty or the defendant
I just wanted to be alone on the grass looking at the sky

My dream is to drive my car to a deserted place
Lying on the grass with my love and know that there is not one around
Look for stars, to kiss a bitch and have sex in the grass
And explain to her that loves me no bitch

I just need a bottle of vodka to spend the night here
This woman fucks like a bitch, I do not want to leave here
In the following lines I will tell you more about my other dream
One day I pick up a guitar, play music without lyrics and know that I'm your man

I drive my car, this time to the beach
You ask me to take my shirt off, and then take the exit
This time is 02:00 am, this is my favorite time
To make a fire and call you my dear

I do not want that day never dawns
Because for me, only in the morning is peace
You must be thinking, "This guy loves the dawn"
I take your questions, I love the night and never loved anything

It's only trip, I wanted a way to finish this text
But okay, it will have a sequel, is without end and no beginning
Wait then, I'll post the second part another day
You will read the story imagining in your mind, and think about what would



== PORTUGUESE (MY LANGUAGE) =

Cara, veja voce mesmo, eu preciso mandar umas rimas
Para que esse tedio passe rapido eu pegue algumas minas
Eu sei que nada disso vai rimar em inglês
Mas foda-se entao, eu faço poesia em portugues

E entao voce pode pensar no que irá fazer mais tarde
Quando a madrugada, o frio bater, voce verá que toda essa merda arde
O frio vai bater mas nao vai doer tanto quanto a minha rima
Voce sentirá queimando na sua pele porque o frio já nao está por cima

Tipo, nao tenho porra nenhuma para fazer, entao eu faço isso pra me destrair
Foda-se se voce nao gosta, fique sabendo que eu nao me preocuparei se voce nao me ouvir
Pelo menos eu nao faço freestyles que falam de comidas
Prefiro falar coisas que acontecem, faço isso sobre o efeito da bebida

Isso nao é nada para ser legal, é apenas para me expressar
Sao muitas ideias na mente, eu nao sei onde eu vim parar
Nao faço ideia de onde estou, mas eu te digo que nao sou o culpado nem o réu
Eu só queria estar sozinho deitado na grama olhando pro céu

Meu sonho é dirigir meu carro até um lugar deserto
Deitar na grama com meu amor e saber que nao há ninguem por perto
Olhar para estrelas, dar um beijo em uma vadia e fazer sexo na grama
E explicar para ela que nenhuma vadia me ama

Preciso apenas de uma garrafa de vodka para passar a noite aqui
Essa mulher fode como uma cadela, eu nao quero mais sair daqui
Nas proximas linhas vou contar mais sobre outro sonho meu
Um dia quero pegar um violão, tocar musicas sem letras e saber que o seu homem sou eu

Quero dirigir meu carro, dessa vez até a praia
Pedir pra voce tirar a blusa, e em seguida tire a saia
Dessa vez são 02:00 da madrugada, essa é minha hora preferida
Pra fazer uma fogueira e te chamar de minha querida

Nao quero que o dia amanheça nunca mais
Porque para mim, só na madrugada está a paz
Voce deve estar pensando: "Esse cara ama a madrugada"
Eu tiro suas duvidas, amo a madrugada como nunca amei nada

É só viagem, eu queria uma maneira pra terminar esse texto
Mas tudo bem, isso vai ter uma continuação, é sem fim e sem começo
Aguardem então, eu irei postar a segunda parte outro dia
Você vai ler imaginando a historia na sua mente, e pensar no que faria
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Re: The journey of a bored - FREESTYLE

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Mar 15th, '10, 01:25

These lyrics are really deep for something you did when you were bored.
You love the night, you love the day, and yet you love nothing. That's very poetic and philosophical, if I'm interpreting it right.
You have a gift, banks.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12

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Re: The journey of a bored - FREESTYLE

Postby Banks » Mar 15th, '10, 02:05

GoodGirlsGetGutted wrote:These lyrics are really deep for something you did when you were bored.
You love the night, you love the day, and yet you love nothing. That's very poetic and philosophical, if I'm interpreting it right.
You have a gift, banks.

Thanks man, I tried to do something to stop the boredom, and left it ...
I really like philosophy, but not tried to do something philosophical haha
but what part of the text you like best?
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Re: The journey of a bored - FREESTYLE

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Mar 15th, '10, 02:26

Nao quero que o dia amanheça nunca mais
Porque para mim, só na madrugada está a paz
Voce deve estar pensando: "Esse cara ama a madrugada"
Eu tiro suas duvidas, amo a madrugada como nunca amei nada

That was thought provoking.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12

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Re: The journey of a bored - FREESTYLE

Postby Arrinef » Mar 15th, '10, 02:31

damn, thats pretty deep, and complex

i wish my mind worked like yours when im bored :y:
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Re: The journey of a bored - FREESTYLE

Postby Banks » Mar 15th, '10, 02:34

ArrineF wrote:damn, thats pretty deep, and complex

i wish my mind worked like yours when im bored :y:

tnx very muchdude, I'll do more often :y:
GoodGirlsGetGutted wrote:Nao quero que o dia amanheça nunca mais
Porque para mim, só na madrugada está a paz
Voce deve estar pensando: "Esse cara ama a madrugada"
Eu tiro suas duvidas, amo a madrugada como nunca amei nada

That was thought provoking.

thanks, you understood that part in English? :)
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