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Random small piece

Postby Just Silver » Mar 15th, '10, 02:56

Very small had writers block like crazy had it when i wrote this



I get these guns sniffing coke drinkin pepsi one
Who had left this rum is gonna be bummed
Cause I took that mixed everything at once
Backwash lumps and becomes solid
Fuck the promise i come up and struck the longest
Flawless of synagogue-ish moshing of words and off to serve
Im positive no offs to church i can keep a word
I can keep a line and beat and the rhyme in me occurs
Not violently you might just reach my peak and live
I deal with lives a life dealership I strike fear in kids
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Re: Random small piece

Postby Fa-Q » Mar 15th, '10, 03:01

First line is pretty dope...good drop Silv
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Re: Random small piece

Postby Just Silver » Mar 15th, '10, 03:12

Fa-Q wrote:First line is pretty dope...good drop Silv

thanks trying to get out of the block as soon as i can but its weird it just happens
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