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A Short One...(Shots@ Ice Da 5'4" ?)

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A Short One...(Shots@ Ice Da 5'4" ?)

Postby Solace » Mar 18th, '10, 02:24

Lmao now i dont even have to try..This stuff just helps me get back into writing. Come on Ice, little boy write something up!

How does it feel, huh? That the fact is getting much clearer,
That your entire fanbase is seen when you look in the mirror,
Such a fuckin' twit, go whine about how tough college is,
Only difference from you and Roth is you don't love colleges,
Fake as fuck, virgin 20 year old who ain't getting laid or drunk,
All those gangster stories bro you probably just made 'em up,
Don't get it twisted, sit and listen to this midget's bitch admission,
With his shit ambition, rip in stitches, my fingers been bit itching,
To smack this failed clone up, pretending to be a grown up,
Just can't admit, so Req just tells himself that he don't suck.
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Re: A Short One...(Shots@ Ice Da 5'4" ?)

Postby Requiem » Mar 18th, '10, 03:33

:shakehead: can't u diss anyone else? ROFL :laughing:

some nice lines in there, a few forced rhymes but i enjoyed it :y:
u got too much time on ur hands :facepalm
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Re: A Short One...(Shots@ Ice Da 5'4" ?)

Postby Solace » Mar 18th, '10, 03:35

5 minutes isnt too much time on my hands..not my fault you cant write that in 5 minutes. :coffee:
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Re: A Short One...(Shots@ Ice Da 5'4" ?)

Postby Requiem » Mar 18th, '10, 03:38

Solace wrote:5 minutes isnt too much time on my hands..not my fault you cant write that in 5 minutes. :coffee:

hey i'm in college what's your excuse :smoking:
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Re: A Short One...(Shots@ Ice Da 5'4" ?)

Postby Solace » Mar 18th, '10, 03:39

What's my excuse for what...Practically keystyling up like 10 lines..?
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