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Re: Lightning In A Bottle

Postby Fa-Q » Mar 18th, '10, 07:04

Great imagery and structure on this one...man just about the only thing you don't have his multis...it would give your writing so much depth if you added them...think about it...I liked this piece though :)
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Re: Lightning In A Bottle

Postby dR3 » Mar 18th, '10, 12:45

Really nice work Geno, keep it up :y:
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Re: Lightning In A Bottle

Postby Enimee » Mar 18th, '10, 14:58

hahaha i loved this shit bro that first like had me rollin and it just kept goin def hot
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Re: Lightning In A Bottle

Postby dR3 » Mar 18th, '10, 20:16

I tried this with the We As Americans beat, and DAYYUUM :happy:
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Re: Lightning In A Bottle

Postby dR3 » Mar 18th, '10, 20:48

Yeah right. :coffee:
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Re: Lightning In A Bottle

Postby X'ed Up » Mar 19th, '10, 23:25

It was AWFUL

just the opposite of that ;)

Flow and structure was on point :worship:
More multis and this would have been perfect
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