Emotional Devastation(Hunter Diss)

[X'ed Up]

Writing this diss to this beat http://www.shadowville.com/beats/moods/angry-beats
The first one(2020 beat)

P.S Hunter is not on these boards

This lyrical attack is to this punk pussy
Who better learn when not to push me,
The constant battling’s pushed us to the edge,
But if I fall we’re both falling of that ledge,
Mothafucka your words don’t or can reach me,
Short ass bitching bitch may I call you bitchy?,
Remember when I nearly sliced you with many blades,
Thank god, I remembered you had plenty of AIDS,
The hardest song you’ve heard is probably Tik Tok,
Yet you walk around telling girls of your big cock,
That you wished you had and could blow and suck,
But in the meantime you have Christian to go and fuck,

(Chorus/Hook) x2
Always trying to get under my skin,
But this time my tolerance will end,
Now I transfer my anger to this pen,
To devastate you lyrically again,

2nd Verse coming up almost now

[dR3]

Not really good as your other works, but it's good. I like the last line of the chorus lol.

And try this beat: http://www.shadowville.com/1062/genres/ ... ood-stains
A lil too 'east-costish', but fuck it.

[Solace]

Your rhymes are real wack/amateur on this one. Not impressed at all.

Thank god, I remembered you had plenty of AIDS,

lmfao what the fuck kind of diss is that? "You have plenty of aids" woahhh shitt dude sick punch?

Wack rhyme scheme, shitty multies, go and fuck/blow and suck seemed to be the best multi on this piece...Like what, two personals? The last line, and how he talks big of his dick or something? Shitty punches, hell there were barely any punches.

Hook/Chorus is nice though.

[dR3]

Solace, is that a variation of Pedobear in your avatar?

[Solace]

Yeah.

Awesome face+pedobear style.

You know how I do.

[dR3]

Damn, that bear cracks me up...

[X'ed Up]

Your rhymes are real wack/amateur on this one. Not impressed at all.

Thank god, I remembered you had plenty of AIDS,

lmfao what the fuck kind of diss is that? "You have plenty of aids" woahhh shitt dude sick punch?

Wack rhyme scheme, shitty multies, go and fuck/blow and suck seemed to be the best multi on this piece...Like what, two personals? The last line, and how he talks big of his dick or something? Shitty punches, hell there were barely any punches.

Hook/Chorus is nice though.

I re-read it and now it seems wack

I guess I'll have to re-do some parts on this