High School Infamy

[Ticalrecords]

wrote this to the Marshall Mathers instrumental. a little background: i started rappin in front of people n what not, and i noticed that shits changed yk. feedback is muuch appreciated.


Well aint that a surprise, i guess ill have to categorize,
this new turn of events, as life giving me new terms to accept
haha okay so where to begin?/
im glad i don't gotta worry bout getting "chronic" that you would swear to be mids/
whatever, its even weirder when people who would normally ignore me/
smile at me and then cordially approach me/
we conduct some small talk but iv already got the message/
so i'm counting off the seconds, till they pop the question/
"kick a freestyle for us", it aint even a request its an order/
and this is coming from a group that consists of my most respected supporters/
so i'm thinking aite lets just get this 8 mile imitation over with/
and right on cue - some one has to comment on my relative state of soberness/
then they cox me - "hey i swur if you kick an ill freestyle man/
we'll all throw down to throw u a free dime bag"/
huh my first paid gig, and its possibly on the worst stage with,
this asshole needing to beat box, so loud the whole cafeteria has no reason to eavesdrop/
and im like "Well thanks guys this is JUST FABULOUS!!/
call me if you ever have trouble finding another ass to kiss"/
well whatever, i guess the attention is really appreciated/
but i already have friends so the rest just see me as easy baiting/
say they got me hook line and sinker/
bragging "oh you got pushed like a splinter, nigger"/
well what the fuck man you want me to answer back?/
fuck a slap on the wrist ill leave neither of your hands attached/
mutherfucker you don't want me to end it with bomb threats/
lyrical exercise? put ur hands down i don't wanna see evidence of your palm sweat/
so if i may solicit a comment: how can you find so many bitches to fuck when, your underage ass is still dealing with an Oedipus Complex?/
yeaa yea im sure yall giggle and call it funny/
you got your damn reaction - isn't that all you've wanted from me?!/



I plan on adding to this, but if i dont then this is how it would end. what yall think?

[Fa-Q]

Loved the Fabulous/ass to kiss line...everythings pretty dope but this is TR and they judge on if things are spelled correct and grammar and stuff so try and get that fixed if you want veiws/comments...also structure (even though it doesn't really matter) people on here make it a big deal so whatever that's not a priority...but good idea only thing that really needs work is Wordplay/vocab and multis...I would suggest reading some of the dictionary and just read other kids work for multis...I do multis, Yahhah, Zu, Solace, Classthe_king, and Spyder all do great multis so check them out...hey I liked it though keep writing

[Ticalrecords]

thanks man good looks

[tjb]

i like this