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Re-Introduction (Re-Upped)

Postby Tranquil » Mar 21st, '10, 12:18

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Heres a track that i threw together a couple of weeks ago, i was wondering if i should put it out, but here it is, so yer, hope you guys enjoy, and please give your feedback so i can learn on how to improve ;) And if you want any feed, just drop it here, and i will not hesitate to check it out :happy:
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Re: Re-Introduction

Postby Robbie G » Mar 21st, '10, 12:26

Relapse 2 came out? :o

And it was pretty could. Maybe could use some more emphases on some of the lines.

Good job :y:
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Re: Re-Introduction

Postby Tranquil » Mar 21st, '10, 12:27

Robbie G wrote:Relapse 2 came out? :o

And it was pretty could. Maybe could use some more emphases on some of the lines.

Good job :y:

thanks man :flower:
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Re: Re-Introduction

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Mar 21st, '10, 13:25

you started your flow pretty tight but u lost it towards the end
overlays are placed very well but could be turned down a lil bit...
hook sounds clean actually....besides the creativity i cant complain about it
so yeah okay track all around... :y:
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Re: Re-Introduction

Postby Tranquil » Mar 21st, '10, 13:28

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:you started your flow pretty tight but u lost it towards the end
overlays are placed very well but could be turned down a lil bit...
hook sounds clean actually....besides the creativity i cant complain about it
so yeah okay track all around... :y:

thanks, and yeah i no about the overlays, i relized that when i listened to it the day after i recorded it :facepalm2 but i cant change it now, so yer, and thanks for the feed man :happy:
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Re: Re-Introduction

Postby Tranquil » Mar 22nd, '10, 06:17

bump :whistle:
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Re: Re-Introduction

Postby JBM » Mar 22nd, '10, 06:41

Sounding good buddy. Keep it up.
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Re: Re-Introduction

Postby gutawafang » Mar 22nd, '10, 08:42

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Re: Re-Introduction

Postby Tranquil » Mar 22nd, '10, 08:46

hold up, i will re-up it :flower:
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Re: Re-Introduction

Postby gutawafang » Mar 22nd, '10, 08:47

EminemIsLegend wrote:hold up, i will re-up it :flower:

yeah, waiting. :)
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Re: Re-Introduction

Postby Tranquil » Mar 22nd, '10, 08:52

gutawafang wrote:
EminemIsLegend wrote:hold up, i will re-up it :flower:

yeah, waiting. :)

there, its re-upped :flower: :)
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Re: Re-Introduction (Re-Upped)

Postby gutawafang » Mar 22nd, '10, 08:56

Oh man! I loved it man!

The lyrics suit the beat, and the flow is very good man! :worship: :worship: :worship:

It's inspired me to do more better. :worship: :worship: :worship:

Fucking awesome chorus. Very direct. Damn straight. Damn cool man.

I fucking look forward to the whole tape man.

...............................

And man, your mixing is cool. Maybe, um, I'm currently recording some songs, so maybe you can mix for me the the whole mixtape that I'm going to do? :p
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Re: Re-Introduction (Re-Upped)

Postby Tranquil » Mar 22nd, '10, 09:00

gutawafang wrote:Oh man! I loved it man!

The lyrics suit the beat, and the flow is very good man! :worship: :worship: :worship:

It's inspired me to do more better. :worship: :worship: :worship:

Fucking awesome chorus. Very direct. Damn straight. Damn cool man.

I fucking look forward to the whole tape man.

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And man, your mixing is cool. Maybe, um, I'm currently recording some songs, so maybe you can mix for me the the whole mixtape that I'm going to do? :p

who sed i was making a tape :unsure: lol
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Re: Re-Introduction (Re-Upped)

Postby gutawafang » Mar 22nd, '10, 09:09

EminemIsLegend wrote:
gutawafang wrote:Oh man! I loved it man!

The lyrics suit the beat, and the flow is very good man! :worship: :worship: :worship:

It's inspired me to do more better. :worship: :worship: :worship:

Fucking awesome chorus. Very direct. Damn straight. Damn cool man.

I fucking look forward to the whole tape man.

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And man, your mixing is cool. Maybe, um, I'm currently recording some songs, so maybe you can mix for me the the whole mixtape that I'm going to do? :p

who sed i was making a tape :unsure: lol


LOL, I thought from the cover. :sweating:
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Re: Re-Introduction (Re-Upped)

Postby Tranquil » Mar 23rd, '10, 06:36

SiiNiDE wrote:Hmm.. Your flow could use some work my dude. You sped up to cram in a few extra words, then slowed down. Then sped up, then slowed down. It should be a consistant flow all through (unless you switch up on some twista shit) The beat was oldschool, pretty cool. Your emotion was ehh, it was there.. Just sounded a little off to me.

o/a pretty decent my dude. Stay up.

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