Reminisce

[gutawafang]

Reminisce, is there a synonym, is there a better word?
Is there another word that if I say it, it never hurts?
Will a question question a question if I question a question?
Am I in a position of never ending lifeless attention?
Would it matter if I don’t ever confess to you?
Let it stay stuck like a leech, it’d be a bless for you
It’d be the best for you, these thoughts be last for you
I wrote this precious song, and it is just for you
To express that you was something, something good to me
Someone that anyone, I mean anyone would love
I’m missing you, with the fucking pieces of my heart
Why must we always complicate? Why is this so hard?
You was my rain, you was my sun, you was my everything
And since everything is hard, then everything will end
Roses I gave you, they have withered, they have died
But would it live if we still loved? Oh I would’ve lied

[Fa-Q]

good drop Fish...great flow and structure only line i didnt really dig was the question line....i think it would be better if you made a synonym for question each time instead of just repeating it over and over....good drop though

[gutawafang]

good drop Fish...great flow and structure only line i didnt really dig was the question line....i think it would be better if you made a synonym for question each time instead of just repeating it over and over....good drop though

Thank you for the feedback homie.

[GoodGirlsGetGutted]

Question, Guta, would you question the question I question if I question your question, in question, the question question a question if I question a question question?

Nice.

[Fa-Q]

Question, Guta, would you question the question I question if I question your question, in question, the question question a question if I question a question question?

Nice.

I'm going to answer your answer, with an answer while answering the real answer, an answer beyond all answers that can only be answered...by an answer

[gutawafang]

Question, Guta, would you question the question I question if I question your question, in question, the question question a question if I question a question question?

Nice.

HaHAHA. LOL. thanks man.

[Slim Zaddy]

wow ,, i love it man ,,,,,,,,,, keeeep it up ,,, you're doin so good these days ,, bro

[gutawafang]

wow ,, i love it man ,,,,,,,,,, keeeep it up ,,, you're doin so good these days ,, bro

Thanks homie.

[FAME]

Okay this def was a poetry piece I could feel that through the entire time reading it. Had to read it a few times to completely understand the entire scheme of the piece but I totally digged it Like I said before it seems like writing is your way of getting stuff out so that's a good thing. Plus it makes for beautiful poetry

[gutawafang]

Okay this def was a poetry piece I could feel that through the entire time reading it. Had to read it a few times to completely understand the entire scheme of the piece but I totally digged it Like I said before it seems like writing is your way of getting stuff out so that's a good thing. Plus it makes for beautiful poetry

Thanks.

[gutawafang]

Yeah it's a nice piece or poetry. It's very well written and structured too. Subject matter mirrors what's comercial nowadays actually , kinda like a pop song subject matter but it's original and nice overall.

Arigato!