Monster to Man

[Spyder]

Words burst with purpose satanic symphonies of wizardry
Absurd curses, imagery since my birth and the christening,
You heard but weren’t listening, nervous verbs slurred as you choke
As my songs sung, this two pronged tongue squirms down your throat.
You mention me with no remedy, my poisons engaged
Destroyed when you came, clutch, thrust, and hoist him way,
Bones crunch when I clench my teeth, cower, duck as I present the beast
Sing a haunting melody as I gargle the blood of my enemies.
Metaphors leave remorse as the verse course through the veins
How bout now ya crawl, fall and bow to the power, my reign
Your final hour remains, this nostalgia’s regained my ease
A mangled disease, sink my fangs in deep till my angers released.
Quicken as my strut increase, but this isnt eccentric enough
The skies darken as flames take aim from the heavens above,
In cannons they come, a mighty arm swings, im burned at his hand
My fates at the great one until im returned as a man.

[dR3]

Damn, best thing I've ever read in the CW, no doubt. You prove that you deserve the red name.

How long did it take you to write it?

[Spyder]

wow dre thanks alot bro

and about 10 minutes

[Spyder]

thanks for checking

[classthe_king]

I thought this was very average for your standards. The only rhyme that I liked was the last one. Your flow slipped up a couple times. Maybe I didn't get all you "complex" wordplay but oh well.


Weren't you suppossed to diss me

[Spyder]

thanks francesco

and class, no this isnt that piece... but i wasnt putting any wordplay in this piece which means that a little shot lol and i dont boast of complex wordplay so if you dont get em im sorry for ya.

but imo it different with more vocab than what i was doing, people compain my stuff doesnt change, then when it does they dont like it

well they do but cole and class dont...

[classthe_king]

there's a lotta methaphors and diversity

That's why I thought there was something in it tjat I didn't get but obviously not.

[Spyder]

its cool thought u were talkin about wordplay

[Yah-hah]

I dug the vocab for sure, like class and them said it's a hit and miss kinds thing. I dug it though homie, would have liked to see a full profect with this concept

[Spyder]

thanks yah