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Devil

Postby UzaKING » Mar 22nd, '10, 19:26

just started writing after i smoked a fat blunt and this is what i ended up with

It starts to rain tears Im so sick of these plain years
so I sit and drain beers till my veins clear
when pain appears I gain fears from my inhumane careers
Images of slain peers fill my brain like stained mirrors
the cocaines sheer and i sense the devils domains near
I have chains from ear to ear
theres bloodstains in satans sphere
I cant sustain sincere/ Im insane beyond severe

ill probably add more to it later

what you think is it good or bad im not really sure
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Re: Devil

Postby Yah-hah » Mar 22nd, '10, 20:20

Pretty decent multies bro :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


Nundea Mekeze comin soon May 4th
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Re: Devil

Postby UzaKING » Mar 22nd, '10, 21:49

Yah-hah wrote:Pretty decent multies bro :y:



thanks :D
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Re: Devil

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Mar 22nd, '10, 21:52

Kickass and brutal, as I've come to expect from you.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12

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Re: Devil

Postby UzaKING » Mar 22nd, '10, 21:59

GoodGirlsGetGutted wrote:Kickass and brutal, as I've come to expect from you.


ty ty :worship:
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