Me and my homeboy J-Money went over the fire Willy Wonka beat, heres our remix. He's on first verse, im second. Can we please get some feedback? Anyone who takes time to leave feedback, please leave a link of one of your songs you want feedback on.. I will return.
http://www.limelinx.com/files/0f802b3b8 ... 414a435513
THP - Willy Wonka
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Re: THP - Willy Wonka
by kotharapgod » Apr 1st, '10, 07:41
The first guy's lyrics were good, he just needs to put some feelings into it. And you came on clean as hell. Flow was nice, lyrics were tight, "I guess my maps rite, on the road to riches.." loved that line. Keep doin ya thang... 
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Re: THP - Willy Wonka
by youngfire420 » Apr 1st, '10, 07:58
kotharapgod wrote:The first guy's lyrics were good, he just needs to put some feelings into it. And you came on clean as hell. Flow was nice, lyrics were tight, "I guess my maps rite, on the road to riches.." loved that line. Keep doin ya thang...
Appreciate it man!
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Re: THP - Willy Wonka
by theJFKshow » Apr 1st, '10, 09:15
Terrible. This makes me ashamed of hip hop.
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Re: THP - Willy Wonka
by Tranquil » Apr 1st, '10, 10:48
its good, i dont like the beat tho, to mainstream for my taste, the first dude, his lyrics were good but he sounded really bored, so i didnt enjoy his part, but you, you got the tight lyrics, your flow and delivery were on spot 
overall nice song 
overall nice song 
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Re: THP - Willy Wonka
by youngfire420 » Apr 1st, '10, 19:44
theJFKshow wrote:Terrible. This makes me ashamed of hip hop.
Lol im so sorry you didnt like it.
EminemIsLegend wrote:its good, i dont like the beat tho, to mainstream for my taste, the first dude, his lyrics were good but he sounded really bored, so i didnt enjoy his part, but you, you got the tight lyrics, your flow and delivery were on spot
Thanks man!
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Re: THP - Willy Wonka
by °[~CHR!$~]° » Apr 2nd, '10, 12:29
J-Money has no delivery...sounds mad bored..flow was okay...
you came good with delivery...you reminded me of Drake for some reason
beat is weird....just the bass is sick..but other than that meh
overall meh track...
you came good with delivery...you reminded me of Drake for some reason
beat is weird....just the bass is sick..but other than that meh
overall meh track...
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Re: THP - Willy Wonka
by youngfire420 » Apr 2nd, '10, 20:47
°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:J-Money has no delivery...sounds mad bored..flow was okay...
you came good with delivery...you reminded me of Drake for some reason
beat is weird....just the bass is sick..but other than that meh
overall meh track...
Thanks for the feedback!
I love the beat though hahaha. Thanks for taking time to listen and give feedback, ill return!-
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