FAME||Future's Bright

[FAME]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/74540732b10c770e/

Finally got my audio better thanks dad I know I still need some work, but fuck I'm so proud of myself. I thought I screwed up my mic or something

[B.A.D.]

the flow is horrible, you are tryng a strange and more complex one for your beginings, I suggest right now you stick with all the basics to get the hang of it.

basically all needs work, but keep practicing, and choose easier beats to flow to

keep it up

[FAME]

the flow is horrible, you are tryng a strange and more complex one for your beginings, I suggest right now you stick with all the basics to get the hang of it.

basically all needs work, but keep practicing, and choose easier beats to flow to

keep it up

have any links to some easier beats? Thanks

[Jaz]

Have to agree with Big Ax..

here's a link to a track I did on the same beat: http://www.zshare.net/audio/74598828ffc0da02/



It's a battle track, but it should give a general idea of a somewhat smoother flow on it. Not that anyone should mimic another person's flow, but just as a half-assed guide I guess.

[Drama Setter]

Yeah all you need is to match with the beat which you have to practice alot first , keep working

[FAME]

Thanks for all the feedback guys
I'm working on a full length song right now and putting alot of effort into my flow. I really feel the beat so I hope that helps I freestyles over it before writing so I know how I wanted to flow on it. This verse was pretty much a practice run to see how the mic sounded now that I fixed it.

[FAME]

it doesn't feel like you are comfortable with your voice, it also sounds like it's shaky, just practice doing it out loud when no one is around, after you feel comfortable then you should practice your flow and what not

keep it up FAME, young peeps like us gotta keep working

thanks for the feedback Coleon...you doing any more tracks soon? I loved your remix of over with Zu

[gutawafang]

Fucking crazy dope beat.

And I think you're good man. But do better in terms of the tone.