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F.E.A.R (WAP)

Postby mcZu » Apr 4th, '10, 23:32

Another one for the WAP (Wisdom And Poetry) series. This one is called F.E.A.R.


F.E.A.R.. It stands for False Evidence Appearing Real
Evidently, I appear to be disappearing, still-
..I hang ‘round here in F.E.A.R like earrings sealed
As it reveals a man’s true colors, I’m honored, right?
Or is it the cause of people growing color blind?
Falsely adapting peep holes, showing collar minds
They don’t even mind being controlled, dominated
F.E.A.R being an entity, behold.. exonerated
Life is far from a straight path, it’s bold.. accelerated
Cursive due to F.E.A.R, it unfolds agglomerated-
..data, but they say a man fears what he does not understand
Nothing in life is to be feared, covered under hands
It is to be understood, so I cover fear under sand
I wonder, can’t I picture positivism, or is that the ballad?
Fear is a small darkroom where negatives are developed
In order to visualize, you have to comprehend F.E.A.R
To portray success, understanding has to pretend here
To be on the same line as F.E.A.R, I tend, dear-
..God, to be fearless, yet I end up fearing fear itself
Or is it that fear fears me? Fearsome yet clear in itself
Or is the False Evidence Appearing Real fearing itself?
Hence, it appearing to be false, logic seems blind
People lie out of fear, if fear is false, a lie scene demised
Then it means that F.E.A.R fears F.E.A.R
And hope intervenes here, hear, it’s clear, I swear...
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: F.E.A.R (WAP)

Postby Fa-Q » Apr 4th, '10, 23:35

Goddamn your vocab on this is amazing...great drop, good structure...no complaints with this one Zu...:how many "WAP"s do you have?
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Re: F.E.A.R (WAP)

Postby mcZu » Apr 4th, '10, 23:41

Thanks Fa-Q, appreciate it man. Right now, I think I have about 8 WAP pieces. And I don't tend to stop writing these kind of pieces for the time being. Because if I ever where to publish something, this WAP series would be definitely something that I want people to read as a whole in the form of a book.
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Re: F.E.A.R (WAP)

Postby mcZu » Apr 5th, '10, 00:11

Thanks, PINK. Appreciated it, and don't be afraid, I'm not stopping this series.
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Re: F.E.A.R (WAP)

Postby mcZu » Apr 5th, '10, 21:57

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Bump b b bump bump it up
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Bump b b bump bump it up
(Just Blaze)
Bump b b bump bump it up
We gon do it like (Uuh, uuh, uuh)
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Re: F.E.A.R (WAP)

Postby mcZu » Apr 7th, '10, 23:47

mcZu wrote:Bump b b bump bump b b b bump
Bump b b bump bump it up
Bump b b bump bump b bump b bump
Bump b b bump bump it up
(Just Blaze)
Bump b b bump bump it up
We gon do it like (Uuh, uuh, uuh)
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Re: F.E.A.R (WAP)

Postby mcZu » Apr 19th, '10, 13:14

mcZu wrote:
mcZu wrote:Bump b b bump bump b b b bump
Bump b b bump bump it up
Bump b b bump bump b bump b bump
Bump b b bump bump it up
(Just Blaze)
Bump b b bump bump it up
We gon do it like (Uuh, uuh, uuh)
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