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i don't hate you.

Postby hype » Apr 8th, '10, 19:23

I don’t hate you, but I don’t love you neither
you mean nothing to me; you're just a slut to me huh
I won't hurt you, still I wont hug you neither
if we ever meet again, cold is how I’m gonna treat ya

lets rewinds back to a time where you were mine
together forever; you and i were doing fine
but who would've thought that in time you would lie
and sleep with guys as if your life was on the line
everyone knows if you do the crime; you do the time
so don't complain that nobody likes you; don't you cry.
'cause i don't want your tears; girl i don't want you here
i don't know what i saw in you, i guess i were young
and too naive to see what the fuck was going on
when we fucked each other; i did it bareback
never knew that your pussy was so wide; it bare slacked.
i swear that your whole motives bare lacked
any motivation 'cause you just laid there; stared back.
but girl you wasn't any good, i swear that.
you don't look good with no clothes on, i glared at
your naked body when you stripped off; it's bare crap.

I don’t hate you, but I don’t love you neither
you mean nothing to me; you're just a slut to me huh
I won't hurt you, still I wont hug you neither
if we ever meet again, cold is how I’m gonna treat ya
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Re: i don't hate you.

Postby BabyBLue91 » Apr 8th, '10, 20:26

Not bad.. simple, but I liked it :)
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Re: i don't hate you.

Postby Dani911 » Apr 8th, '10, 20:45

touching and really intense. straight, simple but great at the same time :worship: :flower:
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Re: i don't hate you.

Postby X'ed Up » Apr 9th, '10, 21:51

This was terrible and flat-out WACK :coffee:
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Re: i don't hate you.

Postby X'ed Up » Apr 13th, '10, 00:12

this was horrible
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Re: i don't hate you.

Postby hype » Apr 13th, '10, 00:13

lol, how desperate are you?
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Re: i don't hate you.

Postby X'ed Up » Apr 13th, '10, 00:14

hype wrote:lol, how desperate are you?

I'm just doing the same shit you're doing
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Re: i don't hate you.

Postby hype » Apr 13th, '10, 00:14

X'ed Up wrote:
hype wrote:lol, how desperate are you?

I'm just doing the same shit you're doing

oh, i'm pretty sure you started it. plus you did it out of anger, whereas i actually do think you're shit at making raps.
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Re: i don't hate you.

Postby X'ed Up » Apr 13th, '10, 00:15

hype wrote:
X'ed Up wrote:
hype wrote:lol, how desperate are you?

I'm just doing the same shit you're doing

oh, i'm pretty sure you started it. plus you did it out of anger, whereas i actually do think you're shit at making raps.

I did it because of both things you pissed me off....and i check this out and i puked, wiped my mouth and fed this "rap".
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Re: i don't hate you.

Postby hype » Apr 13th, '10, 00:16

i would own you in a freestyle battle.
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Re: i don't hate you.

Postby X'ed Up » Apr 13th, '10, 00:17

hype wrote:i would own you in a freestyle battle.

If you write this shit when you have time to think, how da fuck are you gonna beat me in a freestyle? :whistle:

Anyways goodbye and have fun polluting the CW section :wave:
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Re: i don't hate you.

Postby hype » Apr 13th, '10, 00:17

X'ed Up wrote:
hype wrote:i would own you in a freestyle battle.

If you write this shit when you have time to think, how da fuck are you gonna beat me in a freestyle? :whistle:

Anyways goodbye and have fun polluting the CW section :wave:

bet you'd be too scared to face me in the battle section.
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Re: i don't hate you.

Postby X'ed Up » Apr 13th, '10, 00:18

:laughing:
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Re: i don't hate you.

Postby hype » Apr 13th, '10, 00:20

thought so. pussy.
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Re: i don't hate you.

Postby X'ed Up » Apr 13th, '10, 00:21

hype wrote:thought so. pussy.

Set it up, fucker.
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