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Sometimes

Postby mcZu » Apr 21st, '10, 16:11

I almost did some time, for something I didn’t do
Now, sometimes, some things are vivid due
Some mistakes, that left my life’s pivot screwed
The sum of things that I’d wish to you
Equals every single thing that you miss from Zu
‘cause, sometimes I wake up missing my ex
Feeling like I should end up missing a text
But then, I remember that I feel like hitting my ex
Listen up, next, nah, I’m far from lethal..
But sometimes I wake up, looking in the mirror feeling like Sméagol
Sometimes, I look in the mirror and feel sexy as hell
Just feeling like nothing can stop me as well
Well, sometimes it seems like I accompany misery
Sometimes I feel like a liability in a company hidden see
Physically, sometimes I feel tired like Pirelli
Waking up feeling like.. just hire me already ('cause)
Getting a fine feels far from fine ‘cause it can financially finalize
In hind sight I couldn’t hide my debt like I was already idolized
Trust me, that’s what I’ve learned, folks
‘cause sometimes I do define the term broke
Sometimes I just hate everything or does everything hate me?
Sometimes I feel like you can thank me later, like Drake be
But, wait, see, sometimes I feel like giving up
Not on life, but giving up in life, yet I end up bigging up
Myself at the end of the day, ‘cause I can..
Sometimes I just miss my friends
R.I.P to.. and.., I miss y’all, see you on the other end
Sometimes I hate myself, ‘cause I feel bothered
How I still haven’t visited their graves, I’m sorry my brothers
Guess I’m just too afraid to say goodbye
Sometimes I’m just sick of my hood, sigh, I could, die
On second thought, we all could, tomorrow isn’t promised
You should second that, live every day like your prom is
Tonight.. And you have a date, alright?
'cause sometimes, you just hate hate, right?
Or you can wake up feeling like you hate alright
Sometimes I even hate to write
But the hate fuels me, so everyday Zu writes
A passage or two, sometimes even more
'cause sometimes, just sometimes, hope can even the score..
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
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Re: Sometimes

Postby Yah-hah » Apr 21st, '10, 18:23

Zu comin back lol Yo man I loved it. One of those truthful tracks I dig it man. I lived the RIP line too. But really man who can't love a fresh Zu track :y:
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Re: Sometimes

Postby mcZu » Apr 21st, '10, 23:40

Thanks Yah, 'preciate it.
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Re: Sometimes

Postby classthe_king » Apr 21st, '10, 23:44

Damn zu, i've missed reading your stuff. This was fantastic :worship:

P.S check my thread in mc lounge :o
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Re: Sometimes

Postby mcZu » Apr 21st, '10, 23:48

Thanks Classy.
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Re: Sometimes

Postby Fa-Q » Apr 22nd, '10, 04:33

Damn man great emotional piece...I liked the smeagol line and the couplet following...even though it was a bit corny its how a lot of us feel...good drop Zu, and I want more man where you go that you can't make time for TR lol
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Re: Sometimes

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Apr 22nd, '10, 07:38

I know how talended you are with conveying emotion, and this piece does nothing to argue against my presumption.
Your command of words in pieces like this can be breathtaking.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
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Re: Sometimes

Postby mcZu » Apr 22nd, '10, 15:14

Fa-Q wrote:Damn man great emotional piece...I liked the smeagol line and the couplet following...even though it was a bit corny its how a lot of us feel...good drop Zu, and I want more man where you go that you can't make time for TR lol

Thanks Fa-Q, appreciate it man. And I've been a bit busy with university, life in general and a couple of projects I've been working on.

GoodGirlsGetGutted wrote:I know how talended you are with conveying emotion, and this piece does nothing to argue against my presumption.
Your command of words in pieces like this can be breathtaking.

Thanks G^4, 'preciate it man.
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Re: Sometimes

Postby gutawafang » Apr 26th, '10, 10:45

Getting a fine feels far from fine ‘cause it can financially finalize
good wordplay here man. :y:

overall I dig it. :worship:
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