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5-10 Minute Shit (Old X'ed Up Diss)

Postby Solace » Apr 24th, '10, 03:30

Lmao. Pretty decent imo for 5-10 work. But whatev. He ain't here no more, was gunna release it but then he got banned, but now I'm whatever. Long as my name stays out there.

You're at the bottom of the food chain, far from next to me,
You could just bite Chambers but never be as high as X...TC,
Rest in peace, best believe my stress relief will make you sucker up,
Now ya braces won't do shit when I fuck ya up with uppercuts,
So your flows dumb, there's no fun, messy like sloppy joes,
And your screams and cries are all I want from you in audio,
Call him the best, a pro? Naw, because 'X am' so call him the test,
Best tell he 'excell's in clothes size, fuck he's falling, needs rest,
His condom size and filler lines is the same, they always in 'excess',
You can call me an alien the way I split and all day rip his chest,
Like a videogame we all bashing 'X', excuse for a rappin' mess,
He lacks mass respect and about skills; he don't have it yet,
We must be Y 'cause in the alphabet it seems its always after X,
This lame hopes his names dope, leave him dead like Malcom X,
You dope? Prove it yaself, ain't need no template, do it yaself,
I'm known to reap, dethrone a beast, result: I'll ruin ya health,
Spider got you wrapped in his web then your dopeness rate drops,
'X-act's thug just like his shitty rip off disses thrown to J Roc,
Notice that 'X-plain', like making something understandable,
Slam and burn with acid words that stutter and mutter cannibal.
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Re: 5-10 Minute Shit (Old X'ed Up Diss)

Postby gutawafang » Apr 26th, '10, 10:37

Like a videogame we all bashing 'X', excuse for a rappin' mess, :worship: :worship: :worship:

Lots of nameplay. :y: Good. :y:
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Re: 5-10 Minute Shit (Old X'ed Up Diss)

Postby Solace » Apr 26th, '10, 23:17

Coleon wrote:20 lines in to 5-10 minutes with punches...........O RLY?

Imo it was aight, some lines ruined so try to condense your disses and only keep what hits hard, the sloppy joe line was a real downer, other than that it was full of decent shots

keep it up Sol

All the punches were "X" related, not difficult to make a million filler lines lol.

gutawafang wrote:Like a videogame we all bashing 'X', excuse for a rappin' mess, :worship: :worship: :worship:

Lots of nameplay. :y: Good. :y:

A little too much, repetitive for me but thank you I'm glad you actually liked that.
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Re: 5-10 Minute Shit (Old X'ed Up Diss)

Postby Spyder » May 1st, '10, 03:24

generals attackin X :smoking:
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