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Postby Tranquil » Apr 27th, '10, 09:39

Its a personal one, and i only wanted to see what people thort of it :)
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Re: Ruthless - I'll Die For You

Postby gutawafang » Apr 27th, '10, 09:41

Must be fucking amazing man! could you post the lyrics please? :D
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Re: Ruthless - I'll Die For You

Postby Tranquil » Apr 27th, '10, 09:44

gutawafang wrote:Must be fucking amazing man! could you post the lyrics please? :D

i have to re-write them man ;)
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Re: Ruthless - I'll Die For You

Postby gutawafang » Apr 27th, '10, 09:52

Certain parts I didn't like it because of the inconsistent flow. The flow is good actually, but could be better if you(this is in my opinion) practice it a few times, so as to confirm the flow. Cuz I heard like a few words in the lyrics are not being rapped out.

the beat is not my cup of tea. however it suits the concept of the song, so it's alright for me.

overall, I felt the song more like a freestyle, which can be either good or bad man. :D
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Re: Ruthless - I'll Die For You

Postby Tranquil » Apr 27th, '10, 10:03

gutawafang wrote:Certain parts I didn't like it because of the inconsistent flow. The flow is good actually, but could be better if you(this is in my opinion) practice it a few times, so as to confirm the flow. Cuz I heard like a few words in the lyrics are not being rapped out.

the beat is not my cup of tea. however it suits the concept of the song, so it's alright for me.

overall, I felt the song more like a freestyle, which can be either good or bad man. :D

Thank you ;) and about the practice, i didnt really get a chance to practice considering it was a last minute song, and i was on a time limit, but still i thort it was good, and thank you for an in deph review ;)
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