getting reeely high

[Ticalrecords]

i wrote this to shimmy shimmy ya, and i got reeeeeeal high before writing. im wondering if i crossed the line between free association n just randomly spewing shit out of my mouth. feedback is much appreciated.

okay im brainstormin, cocaine snortin does appeal to me in a gruesome way,
now u hav an answer to what would a mutant say ,
yo im trippin let the acustic play,
only half as stir crazy as that glass half full of haze,
confusin it for amusement’s sake,
foreal im fleshed out, got my plan mapped and checked out
the buried treasure trove of the best bud of course its been X’d out ,
but if you see the map spread out ,
on the table then my so called fable cane come to naval strategists circumstances – curb enthusiAsm, foreal tho i aint in a hurry tho, I wudnt say I got that curry flow,
cuz damn that’s a gimmick – but see I make it lyrics,
I fit it, its specific, not exactly scientific,
but a little literature, nah not that I litter your ear,
by talking trash If anything im twisting your ear,
you ever hav that happen to you?
Yea I’m laughin too, no see they’re laughin at you – the listener/
may it not be a minister –
cuz religion cant take another gut punch they been screamin their innards hurt, a sinister -
silence falls, why aint i hear it making a noise?
to be blunt thats the point now lets put a flame to this joint,
but I digress, I lead myself directly to a bud reference, no but is every one listening?, haha am I glistening?, nah its missing a,
reality check –damn my fallacy’s death, see im doin gods work –
hell do it for me but I like to keep him a god with calm nerves, nah mean?
well ima paint a picture on ur closed eyelids,
think about it why you think smoke rises?
spark the blunt - first toke pull a ghost,
I hold and in that moment god takes in a nose full of smoke
to get his share in the profits, that is due to him for making sure I don’t get caught yet,
foreal im concealed by that slobberin voice in the background – yea okay those coughin noises were hacked out, of my mouth –
im strait, spillin a flow with the lid as unclosed, as a window that shows that the villain has scored//

[Tash8]

i like it good job. not bad when ur high

[Ticalrecords]

thanks man, yo u think its worth recording n putting on a mixtape/demo?

[Spyder]

not bad, u have the grasp of multies and what not
so i would like to see a different topic subject from you

keep with it bro