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Practice verse #2

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Practice verse #2

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 3rd, '10, 04:54

Another practice verse I did up real quick...a freestyle if you will




the only "butts" you see is little stubs in a ashtray
If you wanna get laid then just listen to what my raps say
smoke weed, steal money, have a kid & blow your brains out
do it now or grab a knife & cut your mothafucking veins out
your just a misfit, a little good for nothing bitch kid
I stay making sick shit to leave you with your wrist slit
listen as I rip this I'm showing no forgiveness
to those that shut the door on me I'll pull it off the hinges
can I get a "Amen" pull a shotty & I spray 10
bullets at the priest & killed his niece I drive away then
I roll up to a gas station. I grab a beer light a match waiting
for moonlight to rise above...listen as I laugh satan
what happened to this mad nation? everybody quick to lose their mind
some people tell me that im mad amazing. other people say ok your fine
they said Mike it's your time gotta get out there get your shine
they said "if they cant see your skills then these mothafuckas blind"
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Re: Practice verse #2

Postby Just Silver » May 3rd, '10, 05:00

Didnt real know u as a writer till now good shit

i could flow it perfect
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Re: Practice verse #2

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 3rd, '10, 05:01

thanks for checking it bro :smoking: :worship:
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Re: Practice verse #2

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 3rd, '10, 05:32

:worship:
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Re: Practice verse #2

Postby Tash8 » May 3rd, '10, 05:32

Coleon wrote:to those that shut the door on me I'll pull it off the hinges

sick line


*cough* And all those who look down on me I'm tearing down your balcony *cough*

smoke weed, steal money, have a kid & blow your brains out


"smoke weed, take pills, drop outta school, kill people and drink"

ya see where i'm going with this bro?
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Re: Practice verse #2

Postby DƎRDYPK » May 3rd, '10, 05:38

I see where your going :-k
I didn't mean to go there nor did I want to
nor do I think I went there
I almost went there
but I went farther down the street
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